Winners
Short-list
Long-list
From all of us at Fish, Congratulations to the writers whose Flash Stories were short or long-listed, and in particular to the 10 winners.
Winners
Here are the 10 winning Flash Fiction Stories, as chosen by Tracey Slaughter, to be published in the FISH ANTHOLOGY 2022.
Comments on the flash stories are from Tracey Slaughter, who we sincerely thank for her time and expertise.
FIRST PLACE
The Stone Cottage: by Partridge Boswell
Lyrical pull and enveloping atmosphere distinguished this piece from the first reading, drawing
me into its arresting sensory focus. While understated in terms of narrative action, the dramatic energies of its stonework setting sung, instilling each detail with emotional depth. Its textured, sense-rich approach to sound made its rhythmic sentences and close-range images layered, evocative and rewarding to re-read.
SECOND PLACE
On the Other Side of the World: by Linda Nemec Foster
What attracted me to this piece was how it utilized the dynamics of flash to vibrant structural effect, laying frames of scenic detail cleverly alongside each other to compose a lyric collage of glimpses. What struck me was its skill in capturing brief instants of foreign experience, through an enticing but contained series of images which it left to resonate compellingly.
THIRD PLACE
Millstone: by Z Aaron Young
A dense, disturbing narrative-drive set this piece apart, drawing the reader ever deeper into the meshes of its drama, through to its intensely clever twist. It leads us through the turns of this darkly compelling plot through contained use of dialogue and encounter, making striking use of flash’s minimalism to deliver a honed and high-impact story.
SEVEN HONORABLE MENTIONS (In no particular order)
Crabwalk: by John Walshe
What I found compelling about this piece was its rhythmic energies and attention to sentence tempo and tension to evoke character. Its evocative beat and cleverly timed repetitions delivered a vivid impression of the narrator, keeping the reader ‘jumping big steps’ with its child speaker, and were also skillfully linked to the overall story arc and its dynamic core image-pattern.
Firelight: by Kathryn Henion
The strength of this piece is in its lively mobilizing of setting detail in the service of storytelling. It places us in a vivid slice of landscape through crisp and evocative imagery, and involves us atmospherically in the character’s key childhood glimpse of adult life.
Beauty Curse: by Seamus Scanlon
This piece stood out for its dynamic tone, making skilled use of dialogue and voice to grip the reader’s attention in its edgy narrative. It also allowed this strong vocal focus to drive an innovative form and movement, generating original narrative energy.
Kabul, August 2021: by Marie Altzinger
Making use of sliding frames, this piece juxtaposed two points of view on a central crisis, effectively inhabiting different female angles and voices to political ends. It used this form powerfully but with tight control, letting the explosive off-screen drama arise through subtly selected detail.
Taking Revenge on Gustav Klimt: (or The Paintbrush that isn’t a Paintbrush) by David Lewis
Taking on an effective and tonally-alive point of view, this piece dissects a slice of artist’s model’s life with wry, cutting amusement at the sexual politics of image-making. Sharp, clever, economical and tongue-in-cheek.
A Mother Knows: by Russell Reader
The economy of this piece worked powerfully to control strong emotion and to cover a long history in brief vocalized details. Spoken tension connects us effectively with character, subtly revealing a moving subtext beneath the minimal and controlled narration, approaching a heavy topic through bare contained voice.
While the Planet Still Remains: by Fiona J Mackintosh
Immersive second-person narration and lyric rhythm at the sentence level were at the heart of this piece’s impact. It took on a vast and weighty subject, containing it effectively through sustained focus and a personal approach, building a clever analogy into its ending.
A LITTLE ABOUT THE WINNERS:
Partridge Boswell is a stay-at-home rover, father of seven, and author of the Grolier Award-winning collection Some Far Country. When not hitchhiking or freighthopping, his bindlestiff poems have recently found homes in Poetry, American Poetry Review, Poetry Ireland Review, Southword and The Moth. Co-founder of Bookstock Literary Festival, he teaches at Vallum Society for Education in Arts & Letters in Montreal and troubadours widely with the poetry/music group Los Lorcas, whose debut release Last Night in America is available on Thunder Ridge Records. Please say hello when you see him busking on Grafton Street.
Linda Nemec Foster is a poet and writer, currently living in Grand Rapids, Michigan (USA). She is the granddaughter of immigrants from southern Poland who settled in Cleveland, Ohio. Many of her relatives and friends still live in Poland (some of them near the Ukraine border) and she has visited them and that part of the world many times. The author of 12 collections of poetry (e.g. The Blue Divide, 2021 and The Lake Michigan Mermaid, 2018), Foster was the Inaugural Poet Laureate of Grand Rapids from 2003-2005.
Z. Aaron Young is an MFA candidate in the NYU Low-Residency program and considers himself a fiction writer and spare-time philosopher. His writing has appeared in various folders across his laptop and has been read by tens of people. His hobbies are extremely easy to list and he very much enjoys music. When he’s not sleeping, he can be found more or less awake.
J.P. Walshe lives in Malahide, Co. Dublin and works in libraries. When not surrounded by books he can be found on the sofa trying to forget about them. After starting but then writing nothing for eight years he’s taken up where he left off and finds it a much more productive way to spend insomnia. He once rode a bike cab in San Diego and taught English while pretending to know grammar in Barcelona.”
Kathryn Henion’s fiction has appeared in over twenty journals, including Beloit Fiction Journal, Saranac Review, Natural Bridge, and Green Mountains Review. She earned a Ph.D. in English from Binghamton University, where she was editor of the biannual literary magazine Harpur Palate. Currently she serves as fiction editor for the online journal of art and literature, Anomaly, and lives, works, and writes in Ithaca, NY. www.kathrynhenion.com
When Seamus Scanlon won the Fish Flash Fiction Prize with The Long Wet Grass (2011) he thought he had arrived (in West Cork). When the story became a one act play (2014) he thought he had arrived (on Broadway). When the story became a film (2015) he thought he had arrived (in Hollywood). When the play was translated into Japanese and staged in Tokyo (2018) he thought he had arrived (in the East). Will the Beauty Curse (2022) finally lift his arrival curse? Stay tuned www.seamusscanlon.com
Marie Altzinger was born in Luxembourg, and moved to Ireland at the age of six. Discouraged by a schoolteacher obsessed with the descriptive style of Gerald Manley Hopkins, Marie gave up creative writing for a quarter of a century. Thankfully she eventually saw the error of her ways, and now has two huge suitcases stuffed with PTCs (Pieces to Consider). Marie lives in Dundrum, Dublin, with her wonderful husband, fabulous daughter, and super dog.
David X. Lewis has written journalism for Reuters, speeches on AIDS for WHO, and documents for a Geneva organisation that sacked him. He now focuses on creative writing from Ferney-Voltaire, France. The opening of his third (unpublished) novel was nominated for a Pushcart in 2021, when he also won the Bangor 40-word competition. In 2022 he will be published by Bath Flash Fiction and (twice) in Sticks and Stones, an Oxford anthology of “flash greats”.
Fiona J. Mackintosh (www.fionajmackintosh.com) is the Scottish-American author of a flash collection, The Yet Unknowing World published by Ad Hoc Fiction. She has won the Fish, Bath, Reflex, and Flash 500 Awards, and her short stories have been listed in several cool competitions in the UK and Ireland. She lives just outside Washington D.C., but she’s thankful that her imagination can carry her across continents and time, both during lockdowns and in happier times.
Russell Reader lives in Keele, England, with his husband and two sons. He won first prize in the New Writer Magazine’s Prose and Poetry Awards and has been published by Litro, InkTears, Flash, Grist, and Bath Flash Fiction. One day he would like to write a story that isn’t sad and grim.
Short-list:
(alphabetical order)
There are 41 flash stories in the short-list. There were 948 entries in total.
Title
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First Name
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Last Name
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Kabul, August 2021
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Marie
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Altzinger
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The day you chipped a tooth and touched a nerve
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Lesley
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Bungay
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Labels
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Letty
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Butler
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Fishes I Have Known
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Ric
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Carter
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Brez
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Ava
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Dan-Gur
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Karma Chameleon
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Anne
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Eyries
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Echolalia
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Elizabeth
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Field
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On the Other Side of the World
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Linda
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Nemec Foster
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The Door Opens
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Geoffrey
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Graves
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Firelight
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Kathryn
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Henion
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Lost Treasure
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Maria
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Jackson
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Herring
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Sarah
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Kartalia
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Cleft by the lines of cowards
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Nelum
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Kaur
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Blood Brothers
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Jim
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King
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Koel
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Alfie
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Lee
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Flash Fiction
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Alfie
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Lee
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A Human Jellyfish Goes Missing
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David
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Lewis
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Taking Revenge on August Klimt
(or The Paintbrush that isn’t a Paintbrush)
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David
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Lewis
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A Becket Tale: 1972
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Finbar
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Lillis
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Rocket-ship set-up guide
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Kik
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Lodge
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While the Planet Still Remains
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Fiona J
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Mackintosh
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“Going, Going, Gone!”
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Michael
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Mahoney
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The Prodigal’s Brother
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Patrick
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McCann
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A Brush with Circe
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Lauren
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McNamara
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Never Let Me Go
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Geoffrey
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Mead
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GHOSTS
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Catherine
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Neville
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Posted
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Brigita
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Orel
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A Mother Knows
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Russell
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Reader
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Falling Woman
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Hannah
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Retallick
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For a Time, I
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Hannah
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Retallick
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Meltdown
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Nicholas
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Ruddock
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Bed Time
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Yvonne
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Sampson
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The Sister as a Fox
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Shannon
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Savvas
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Deciduous Trees
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Adrian
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Scanlan
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The Twins
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Seamus
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Scanlon
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Beauty Curse
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Seamus
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Scanlon
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The Kiss
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Jo
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Skinner
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Coppélia Doll Variation
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Michaela
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Tamma
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The Proposal, Lyme Regis, 1936
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Ken
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Wilson
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Satellite of love
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Alison
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Woodhouse
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Millstone
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Z. Aaron
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Young
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Long-list
(alphabetical order)
There are 72 flash stories in the long-list. There were 948 entries in total.
Title
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First Name
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Last Name
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Kabul, August 2021
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Marie
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Altzinger
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SISTERS
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Carrie
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Beckwith
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The Stone Cottage
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Partridge
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Boswell
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A Cry Beneath The Leaves
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Michael P
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Bowles
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White is the Color of Decay
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Matthew
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Brandon
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Things I Would Do if I Was a Disgraced Soviet
Scientist, Living in Exile on the Riviera
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Kati
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Bumbera
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The day you chipped a tooth and touched a nerve
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Lesley
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Bungay
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Labels
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Letty
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Butler
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Fishes I Have Known
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Ric
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Carter
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All That Remains
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Charlene
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Cason
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Man Up
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Yvonne
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Clarke
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Brez
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Ava
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Dan-Gur
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Trying to Write a Haiku
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Rosamund
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Davies
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Driving Home
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Christina
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Eagles
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On taking Macy’s Kittens to the Sawmill
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Henry
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Edwards
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Caravan
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Susan
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Elsley
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Subject: Humanity 2022-4022
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Stephen
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Enciso
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Mountain Air Folly
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Tanya
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Esnault
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Karma Chameleon
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Anne
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Eyries
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Warp Factor
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Tom
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Farrell
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Echolalia
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Elizabeth
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Field
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Leaving hospital with a suitcase
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Nick
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Fordham
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On the Other Side of the World
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Linda
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Nemec Foster
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Burhan Now or Never
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Nancy
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Freund
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Aliens
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John
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Fullerton
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Keys
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Laura
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Geringer Bass
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In the Light
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Cicely
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Gill
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Odette at Tea-Time
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Heather Lynne
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Goddard
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The Door Opens
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Geoffrey
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Graves
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An Imitation
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Leonie
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Gregson
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Last Wave
|
Michael
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Hainsworth
|
Sticks and Stones
|
Daniel
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Harwood
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Turning Back Time
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Hannah
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Hawthorne
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Firelight
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Kathryn
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Henion
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It’s a Living
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Tova
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Hope-Liel
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Lost Treasure
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Maria
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Jackson
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Fishtail or Why I Can’t Recommend a Birthing Pool
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Jupiter
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Jones
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Was this an Act of God
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Roger
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Jones
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Herring
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Sarah
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Kartalia
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Cleft by the lines of cowards
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Nelum
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Kaur
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Blood Brothers
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Jim
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King
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This Isn’t Working Anymore
|
Keith
|
Law
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1-800-KARS-4-KIDS
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jeffrey
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lazar
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Colour of Night
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Roland
|
Leach
|
Koel
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Alfie
|
Lee
|
Flash Fiction
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Alfie
|
Lee
|
The Dragon’s Inn
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Alfie
|
Lee
|
Jack
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Alfie
|
Lee
|
Gilbert
|
Alfie
|
Lee
|
Commonwealth
|
Alfie
|
Lee
|
A Human Jellyfish Goes Missing
|
David
|
Lewis
|
Taking Revenge on August Klimt
(or The Paintbrush that isn’t a Paintbrush)
|
David
|
Lewis
|
A Becket Tale: 1972
|
Finbar
|
Lillis
|
Rocket-ship set-up guide
|
Kik
|
Lodge
|
Broken
|
Laurie
|
Mackie
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While the Planet Still Remains
|
Fiona J
|
Mackintosh
|
Going, Going, Gone!
|
Michael
|
Mahoney
|
Suspicion
|
Robert
|
McBrearty
|
The Prodigal’s Brother
|
Patrick
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McCann
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Mantelpiece
|
Alan
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McCormick
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Fearing
|
Paul
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McKeogh
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A Brush with Circe
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Lauren
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McNamara
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Never Let Me Go
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Geoffrey
|
Mead
|
Nouvelle Cuisine
|
Geoffrey
|
Mead
|
Electric Cold
|
Jane
|
Messer
|
Beyond
|
Hailey
|
Millhollen
|
The Baptism
|
Alison
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Milner
|
Cornered
|
Katrina
|
Moinet
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GHOSTS
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Catherine
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Neville
|
Ed Vedder
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Dominic
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Nunan
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How to take Prizewinning Photos
|
Tom
|
O’Brien
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The Mummies of Guanajuato
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Pamolu
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Oldham
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Versions of Him
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Helen
|
O’Neill
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Posted
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Brigita
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Orel
|
Disassociation
|
Carolyn
|
Peck
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The closest I came to having sex after twelve years
of marriage to a man with anhedonia [cont.]
|
Kathryn
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Phelan
|
A Mother Knows
|
Russell
|
Reader
|
Turkey Legs
|
James
|
Reid
|
Falling Woman
|
Hannah
|
Retallick
|
For a Time, I
|
Hannah
|
Retallick
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The Fly Trap by the Window Adjacent to My House
|
Hannah
|
Retallick
|
Meltdown
|
Nicholas
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Ruddock
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No Future in Being a Postman
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Michael
|
Salander
|
Bed Time
|
Yvonne
|
Sampson
|
The Sister as a Fox
|
Shannon
|
Savvas
|
Deciduous Trees
|
Adrian
|
Scanlan
|
The Twins
|
Seamus
|
Scanlon
|
Beauty Curse
|
Seamus
|
Scanlon
|
Man of Letters
|
Wilma
|
Scharrer
|
Cider on Your Lips
|
Kim
|
Schroeder
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King Cat
|
Lucy
|
Shuttleworth
|
Way Out West
|
John
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Simms
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The Kiss
|
Jo
|
Skinner
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Eventuality
|
Jonathan
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Splittgerber
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Underpaid
|
Jamie
|
Stacey
|
The Spirit of Things
|
Nora
|
Studholme
|
Coppélia Doll Variation
|
Michaela
|
Tamma
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Some creatures trapped in ice
|
Hilary
|
Taylor
|
Dog Nose
|
Brendan
|
Thomas
|
The Movements
|
Cole
|
Tucci
|
Never too late
|
Melanie
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Veenstra
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Crabwalk
|
John
|
Walshe
|
Shedding Skin
|
Nicole
|
Watt
|
Savannah Animals Fun For Kids
|
Susan
|
Wigmore
|
The Proposal, Lyme Regis, 1936
|
Ken
|
Wilson
|
The electric is-ness of life
|
Michele
|
Wong
|
Satellite of love
|
Alison
|
Woodhouse
|
Snowfall
|
Amy
|
Wright
|
Millstone
|
Z. Aaron
|
Young
|
You Can Only Jump Forward
|
Glen
|
Zehr
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