Short Memoir Prize: Results 2023
March 31st, 2023 | Uncategorized | Comments Off on Short Memoir Prize: Results 2023
On behalf of all of us at Fish, we congratulate the 10 winners who made it to the Fish Anthology 2023, and to those writers who made the long and short-lists, well done too.
Thank you to Sean Lusk, for the time and enthusiasm that he put into selecting the winners. (About Sean’s novel.)
The 10 Winners:
Selected by Sean Lusk.
FIRST
My Mother’s Daughter:
by Anneke Bender (USA)
SECOND
The Dead on Street View:
by Nuala Roche (Ireland)
THIRD
Escape Van:
by Sabine Casparie (UK)
HONORARY MENTIONS
A Brown Night: by Thelma McGough (UK)
Speaking of Love: by Kathryn Phelan (Ireland)
Of Many Things I have no clear remembrance: by Dani Salvadori (UK)
Bravo India Lima: by Olivia Rana (N Ireland)
For Richer, Poorer and Doritos: by Cheryl Miller-Fitzgerald (USA)
Except for One Thing: by Thomas Darlington Crancer (USA)
Notes from judge, Sean Lusk:
These memoirs took me on quite the journey – from the Grand Canyon to Tokyo, from Dublin to Colorado, from London to Poland. But a memoir is a journey in time, and many of these memoirs pinpointed the precise feeling of loss and longing and desire that memories evoke in us. Many were adventurous with form, being in the true sense ‘hybrid’ syntheses of essay, article, and story.
The winning memoirs (and it was hard to choose first, second, third and beyond) seemed to me to perfectly encapsulate the memoir, rising above form to call up a memory that felt intensely true and personal – at once particular and yet also universal. Except for One Thingis a tender, heartfelt account of coming to terms with grief. For Richer, Poorer and Doritos is beautifully observed, its sadness tinged with humour and, ultimately, acceptance. Bravo India Lima is a powerful and superbly observed memoir of the troubles in Northern Ireland, taking us from the eighties through the Good Friday Agreement and almost to the present day. Of Many Things I Have No Clear Remembranceis a collision of memories of words, artefacts and poems, a hybrid piece that captures the often fractured and uncertain nature of remembrance. Speaking of Loveis an enormously assured piece of writing, a story of a relationship told with deft sensuality and the troubling uncertainty of loss. Death by Overworkis a fascinating piece, set in Tokyo, the routine horror of train suicides punctuated by an English teacher’s regular conversations with his student, and a developing obsession with a woman merely glimpsed. It makes an unfamiliar culture seem both more alien and yet also intensely known. A Brown Nightis a harrowing story of a father’s attempt to take his own life, and the bravery of a nine-year-old girl who saves him and, in doing so, also saves herself. I found it very moving.
Third placed story Escape Vanis another story that features psychological trauma and thoughts of suicide. Its honesty, the clarity of the writing and its redemptive quality are profoundly felt. It’s also written with quiet subtlety, with ever greater detail as the narrator responds once more to what life has to give. I thought it wonderful.
Second placed story, The Dead on Street Viewsurprised me. At first I feared it was going to be a lecture, with its dictionary definitions of the word ‘gatch’ (geáitse) and quotations, but it had me ensnared as the narrator observed the particular bend in their son’s neck, and then moved into the uses (and abuses) of google street view, and the notion that we are always looking back at the dead, as street view looks back in time. I thought it ingenious, and the ingenuity increased as the memoir made its case, and as the writing grew more lyrical and with such beautifully placed lines as ‘Each way lay an impaling’ and the aunt who says: ‘I’d like to know what I could’ve been.’ It’s well worth reading two or three times, this memoir, because it captures that longing for loss – lost time, lost moments, lost lives that is the epitome of memoir, while also playing skilfully with form.
And finally, our first-placed story My Mother’s Daughter. This, it seems to me, does everything a memoir should – the slightly uncertain beginning, as the walk in the Grand Canyon is repeated three times through different photographs, reflecting the way memories come to us, initially uncertain before we impose our own sense and our own story upon them. The specificity of detail is so beautiful – the van, the lab, the trinkets. The relationship of the daughter with the mother, the ex-nun with a mischievous, even anarchic streak – is rendered perfectly. And their first moment of parting, the opening movement in the long parting to come, is simply exquisite. I was deeply touched by this memoir, as I was by so many I read. Judging these has truly been an honour.
SHORT-LIST (43, in alphabetical order. There were 879 entries)
Boxes, Crates and Plastic-shrouded Pallets |
Mara |
Adamitz Scrupe |
Ghosts |
Amal |
Alhomsi |
From Enchanted Garden to Beguiling Seas |
Clare |
Allcard |
My Mother’s Daughter |
Anneke |
Bender |
Eggshells |
Eleanor |
Blake |
ORPHEUS AFTER |
Partridge |
Boswell |
Nozzy |
Adam |
Brown |
Snake Handling |
Grant |
Buday |
Escape Van |
Sabine |
Casparie |
Still |
Sarah Easter |
Collins |
Conversations in Hull |
Sarah Easter |
Collins |
The Chevrotain |
Lisa |
Cortez |
Exceot for one Thing |
Thomas |
Crancer |
St Columba’s Curse |
Sarah |
Davies |
Red and White |
Wisteria |
Deng |
Cocoon |
Yvonne |
Fein |
For Richer, Poorer and Doritos |
Cheryl |
Fitzgerald |
My mum was a gardener |
Sarah |
Forbes |
A Tale from the Silk Road |
Stephen |
Hayden |
Beasts and Burdens |
Emma |
Hillier |
A True Story About Mrs Smith |
Rory |
KILALEA |
Rincon el Diablo |
John |
Ledford |
Consider the Octopus |
Francesca |
Leonie |
Deep Songs |
Francesca |
Leonie |
Essay |
Asya |
Likhman |
The first funeral |
Harriet |
Mason |
Walking on Walls |
Thelma |
McGough |
Tukwila Gold and Pawn |
Nikita |
Minkin |
The year the clocks stopped |
Clar |
Ni Chonghaile |
How I Came to Spend Christmas in a Psychiatric Facility |
Lauren |
O’Donovan |
Speaking of Love |
Kathryn |
Phelan |
Standing in the Rain |
Stephen |
Policoff |
Clip |
Jay |
Prosser |
Bravo, India, Lima. |
Olivia |
Rana |
Teach/Each/Ache: Notes from the |
Stuart |
Robbins |
The Dead on Street View |
Nuala |
Roche |
Slammakin |
Ailsa |
Ross |
Of many things I have no clear remembrance |
Dani |
Salvadori |
Carrying the Griefcase or Death by Overwork |
James |
Scoles |
A Walk Home |
Michelle |
Scorziello |
The Distance Between Things |
Carrie |
Seymour |
The Pink Hibiscus |
Charlene |
Smith |
What to Expect When You’re Expecting Breast Cancer: Act I—Chemotherapy—Begins |
Katie |
Snyder |
LONG-LIST (104. In Alphabetical Order. There were 879 entries)
Boxes, Crates and Plastic-shrouded Pallets |
Mara |
Adamitz Scrupe |
Ghosts |
Amal |
Alhomsi |
From Enchanted Garden to Beguiling Seas |
Clare |
Allcard |
The Strange Legacy of a Diminutive Ghost |
Anneke |
Bender |
My Mother’s Daughter |
Anneke |
Bender |
Eggshells |
Eleanor |
Blake |
Patriots’ Day |
Partridge |
Boswell |
ORPHEUS AFTER |
Partridge |
Boswell |
A Fiery Solace |
Kevin |
Brophy |
Nozzy |
Adam |
Brown |
Snake Handling |
Grant |
Buday |
Dry Stone |
James Roderick |
Burns |
Karmageddon |
Lynn |
Bushell |
The Yellow Door |
Mairéad |
Carew |
Escape Van |
Sabine |
Casparie |
The Initiation |
Jaineba |
Chang |
Shipwrecks |
Stephanie |
Colburn |
Still |
Sarah Easter |
Collins |
Conversations in Hull |
Sarah Easter |
Collins |
My sister |
jane |
cornes maclean |
The Chevrotain |
Lisa |
Cortez |
Exceot for one Thing |
Thomas |
Crancer |
Microwave Dinners & MTV |
sally |
cranswick |
The Performance of Grief |
Claudia |
Cruttwell |
Confession |
Sarah |
Davies |
St Columba’s Curse |
Sarah |
Davies |
Leaving Home |
Teresa |
DeCrescenzo |
Red and White |
Wisteria |
Deng |
Edith L. Slocum |
Tim |
Dennis |
Names Will Never Again Hurt Me |
Deirdre |
Devally |
The Gravy Train |
Garret |
Dwyer Joyce |
Cocoon |
Yvonne |
Fein |
For Richer, Poorer and Doritos |
Cheryl |
Fitzgerald |
Do-Overs |
Adrian |
Fleur |
My mum was a gardener |
Sarah |
Forbes |
Last Dogs |
Michael |
Forester |
The Lives We Leave Behind |
Sally |
Fox |
This is Us |
Sally |
Fox |
Zulu |
TOM |
FOX |
Dear Mum |
Joyce |
Fox |
The Other Half of Everything |
Adrian |
Fox |
Casting On |
Jane |
Fraser |
A Life in Three Plaits. |
Ruth |
Geldard |
A Tale from the Silk Road |
Stephen |
Hayden |
Beasts and Burdens |
Emma |
Hillier |
Thirsty |
Marcella |
Hourihane |
The Rocky Road |
Rosemary |
Johnston |
Is Today Tuesday |
Ann |
Jolly |
The Ash |
Rosemary |
Jones |
A True Story About Mrs Smith |
Rory |
KILALEA |
THE YEAR OF DEAD DAYS |
Alice |
Langley |
Rincon el Diablo |
John |
Ledford |
Consider the Octopus |
Francesca |
Leonie |
Deep Songs |
Francesca |
Leonie |
Essay |
Asya |
Likhman |
Diary of an Iranian Schoolgirl |
Mahta |
Mansouri |
The first funeral |
Harriet |
Mason |
Flirting with the Pentecostals |
Helen |
McClements |
Bare Naked Magic |
Eileen |
McFalls |
Walking on Walls |
Thelma |
McGough |
Tukwila Gold and Pawn |
Nikita |
Minkin |
The Prodigal Son |
Victoria |
Mizen |
Someone Young |
Hannah |
Morphet |
The End |
Carla |
Myers |
The year the clocks stopped |
Clar |
Ni Chonghaile |
Flames |
Marilyn |
Nunney |
How I Came to Spend Christmas in a |
Lauren |
O’Donovan |
He Waits for Me |
fiona |
O’Sullivan |
Small and Lucky: One Mind’s Memoir |
Kevin |
ONeill |
Speaking of Love |
Kathryn |
Phelan |
Standing in the Rain |
Stephen |
Policoff |
Problems in the Buying of Shampoo |
Peter |
Pool |
Clip |
Jay |
Prosser |
Mother of happiness |
Marianne |
Puxley |
I Choose the Music |
Marion |
Quednau |
Bravo, India, Lima |
Olivia |
Rana |
Bravo, India, Lima. |
Olivia |
Rana |
Crocodile Shoes |
Jeff |
Richards |
Running in Thistles |
Alina |
Rios |
Teach/Each/Ache: Notes from the Fulton County Jail |
Stuart |
Robbins |
The Dead on Street View |
Nuala |
Roche |
Slammakin |
Ailsa |
Ross |
Goree Island |
Zurina |
Saban |
Of many things I have no clear remembrance |
Dani |
Salvadori |
A Daughter to Watch Over Her |
Cathy |
Schen |
Blueberries |
Anne |
Schuchman |
The Mommy Friends |
Anne |
Schuchman |
Carrying the Griefcase or Death by Overwork |
James |
Scoles |
A Walk Home |
Michelle |
Scorziello |
The Distance Between Things |
Carrie |
Seymour |
The Greyhound |
Alan |
Sincic |
Brick by Brick |
Vicki |
Siska |
Demolitions |
Ruskin |
Smith |
The Pink Hibiscus |
Charlene |
Smith |
What to Expect When You’re Expecting Breast Cancer: Act I—Chemotherapy—Begins |
Katie |
Snyder |
Into the shadows; a memoir |
Hayley |
Solomon |
A World Away |
Charity |
Starrett |
Fathers’ Day |
Claire |
Steele |
THE GREAT ONE |
Michal Gregory |
Stephens |
Noli Me Tangere |
Pamela |
Swanborough |
The Blue Curtain |
Jackie |
Taylor |
It Never Rains in Wycombe |
Jennifer |
Twomey |
Good Girl |
Kayla Pica |
Williams |
Himalayan Sunset |
Scott |
Winkler |