Billy O’Callaghan, judge for the 2017/18 Short Story Prize
First: Clippings by Helen Chambers (England)
Is awarded €3,000, one thousand of which is for travel to the launch of the Fish Anthology 2018, and a short story workshop at the West Cork Literary Festival in July 2018.
Second: Herr Seigfried Ottmar by Thiva Narayanan (Malaysia)
Is awarded a week in residence at Anam Cara Writers’ Retreat and €300.
Third: Beatitudes by Janet Smith Moore (USA)
Is awarded €300
Honorary Mentions:
He Writes by Travis Elsum (Australia)
Yana by Georgina Eddison (Ireland)
Hope is a Thing With Feathers by Georgina Eddison (Ireland)
Ginger Snaps by Linda Edwards
Psittacus Erithacus by Percy Herbert (England)
Cranberry Sauce by Emma Seaman (England)
Drive All Night by Alan S. Falkingham (USA)
From all of us at Fish we congratulate the writers of the ten stories selected by Billy for publication in the Fish Anthology 2018. There were 1,170 entries and the competition was very tough. Thank to Billy O’Callaghan for his careful attention. We appreciate his interest and support of Fish’s endeavour to publish new and aspiring writers. We are delighted that these ten stories will make for an anthology of excellent work. We look forward to meeting the writers and hearing them read at the launch at the West Cork Literary Festival in July.
– Clem Cairns –
Billy O’Callaghan’s comments on the stories:
Reading these stories, also those that fell short of the final cut, was a real pleasure but also quite a challenge. The standard of this work is high, and even the ones that didn’t make the anthology had so much about them worth admiring, not just in terms of the stories being told but also in the polish of the sentences, the development of the characters and, especially, the emotional impact these writers managed to wring from just a few pages. Aware of just how much was at stake, I struggled in particular to separate the top five stories, and loved them all for different reasons, and it was only after several readings that I settled on my final order. On another day, and with another judge, the results could very well be different.
Clippings – Just exceptional. I was a bit sceptical at first of the structure, but the story unfurls wonderfully. Incredibly emotional, truthful and heartfelt. Beautifully drawn characters. I read this several times over the past two weeks and as I sit here now, I want to read it again. It’s a story that has left a deep impression on me.
Herr Sigfried Ottmar – This one was so beautifully done. Measured and accomplished storytelling, with a strong sense of authenticity and the characters vividly rendered. The ending was perhaps inevitable, yet unavoidable, and no less affecting for that.
Beatitudes – Very well written, and clearly the work of an extremely talented writer. Fine dialogue, beautiful pacing. Deeply moving story, too. Real characters, and such a great sense of authenticity. I read it several times, and it seemed to get better with each pass.
He Writes – The pacing of this story is so impressive. The language is utterly clean and objective, and yet somehow full of emotion and humanity. The story itself seems slight and yet, in its way, immense. This one came very close for me.
Yana – Another really excellent story. Sad and moving, and beautifully told. At times the sense of tragedy is almost unbearable, and yet there is such a gleam of humanity that makes it so compelling. A beautiful depiction of a small life and the vagaries of fate.
Ginger Snaps – This one displayed a wonderfully light touch. The narrative was suitably flighty and yet, at the same time, cleverly plotted. I was very impressed. And the twist at the end is just terrific.
Hope is a Thing With Feathers – Again, a very accomplished piece of writing, with nothing at all about it to dislike. When stories are of such a standard, it is simply a matter of favouring those that resonate in some personal way. This one was excellent, vividly told and deeply resonant. A worthy inclusion to the anthology.
Cranberry Sauce – Well written and well constructed. A real-world problem, nice build-up of tension, and narrative handled with sensitive vulnerability. Best of all, though, there is just a lovely lightness of touch.
Drive All Night – Reading this, I had, once again, the sense of very accomplished storytelling. Good build-up of tension, decent dialogue, though a tad melodramatic and overblown. Some really lovely details elevated this one.
Psittacus Erithacus – A good, straightforward story. Gentle, nicely written.
(alphabetical order)
There are 54 stories in the short-list. The total entry was 1,170.
Hope is the Thing With Feathers |
Georgina |
Eddison |
Sin |
Georgina |
Eddison |
Yana |
Georgina |
Eddison |
Plenty of Time, Joan |
Jane |
Fraser |
LAYBY LULLABY |
Katayoun |
Medhat |
TRESPASS |
Katayoun |
Medhat |
The Natural |
Paul |
Mitchell |
Beatitudes |
Janet |
Moore |
Loveoid |
J. L. |
Morin |
The Fish |
Helen E. |
Mundler |
The Return of Waldo Jeffers |
Gavin |
Murphy |
Herr Siegfried Ottmar |
Thiva |
Narayanan |
living the dream |
Martin |
Nathan |
Plunging into Peru |
Helen |
Newdick |
Clean |
Giles |
Newington |
THE LAST HURRAH |
Cláir |
Ní Aonghusa |
Sunglasses |
Stephanie |
Norgate |
Light Rising from Below |
Sophie |
Nussle |
Elizabeth’s Kitchen |
Eileen |
O’Donoghue |
Magma |
Mary |
O’Shea |
SNAP SNAP BABY |
Kate |
Oriol |
the pin |
G. L. |
Osborne |
Mutton Curry |
Richard |
Philip |
Home |
Ian |
Priestley |
Take Her Fishing |
John |
Pringle |
The Public Record |
David |
Rea |
THE EULOGISTS |
ALEX |
REECE |
Mrs Browning’s legacy |
Peter |
Rodgers |
Whisht up a while will you! |
John |
Rodgers |
Breaking News |
Gregory |
Rosenstock |
War from the Words |
David |
Rubenstein |
Gutless Living |
Natalie |
Rule |
A Light in the Green Woods |
RAYMOND |
SHEEHAN |
Papillon |
Jo |
Sinclair |
What You Don’t Know |
Tracey |
Slaughter |
Storybook |
Emma |
Smith-Stevens |
An Ounce of Truth |
Penn |
Spell |
Ambush |
Jo |
Spencely |
A Blue Silk Scarf |
Meri |
Spencer |
Independence Day |
Jenny |
Steel |
Last Sortie |
P J |
Stephenson |
MilkEyed Mender |
Kerry |
Swash |
A Fair Bargain |
Robert |
Temple |
Crosshouse |
Eleanor |
Thom |
Kissing a Goldfish |
Eve |
Turner |
Fractions |
Gabriel |
Valjan |
Becky and the Devil in an Act of Creative Destruction |
Cady |
Vishniac |
JUST GIVING |
Jennie |
Walmsley |
The Thrill of the Chase |
Rick |
Williams |
Fair and Square |
Alison |
Withey |
There is a Spectre |
Christopher |
Young |
(alphabetical order)
There are 180 stories in the long-list. The total entry was 1,170.
Title |
First Name |
Last Name |
Gabe |
Pernille |
AEgidius |
The Arrow |
Angela |
Antle |
FAMILY LOVE, BUT NOT THE NORMAL KIND |
James |
Arnold |
NO ORDINARY LOVE |
James |
Arnold |
The Sixpence Quilt |
Karen |
Ashe |
Still Clinging… |
Cait |
Atherton |
Two Cents |
S |
Baldwin |
Adjectives |
Xanthi |
Barker |
Gay Blade |
Michael |
Barnes |
Attempted Closure |
Andreas |
Bergsten |
A motionless stuffed bear |
Judy |
Birkbeck |
Gold |
Judy |
Birkbeck |
549 |
Evelyn |
Blackwell |
Left-handed jumpers |
Peter |
Blair |
Ice Cold in London |
Martin |
Blayney |
Deliveries |
Kevin |
Bohnert |
Reservoir |
Alice |
Bowen |
Her Green Mohair Jumper |
Edwina |
Bowen |
FINISTERRA |
Rosalind |
Brackenbury |
Muriel |
David |
Bray |
The Caravan |
dan |
brotzel |
Owl Eyes |
Mary |
Brown |
Little Sky |
Ursula |
Brunetti |
Mr Hatch’s Crime |
Justine |
BUDENZ |
Global Relations |
Kathryn |
Burke |
The Deciding Factor(y) |
John |
C Mundow |
Lifeline |
Lauren |
Carroll |
Landbound lullabies |
Selma |
Carvalho |
Clippings |
Helen |
Chambers |
Jewel Thief |
Cliff |
Chen |
Nonlocality |
Cliff |
Chen |
Caitlin’s two sheets of A4 |
Alasdair |
Chisholm |
Lennie’s ode to normality |
Alasdair |
Chisholm |
The Pond |
Veronica |
Ciastko |
John-John |
pauline |
clooney |
Impact Report |
Matthew |
Coburn |
The Second Arrival |
Jonathan |
Colvson |
We Can All Have as Many Words as We Like |
Chrs |
Connolly |
Don’t Kiss Trees |
jacqui |
corcoran |
Dry Food |
jacqui |
corcoran |
The Call |
Hugh |
Costello |
Trip Switch |
Maureen |
Cullen |
Undeclared |
Michael |
Cumiskey |
The Sins of the Fatherland |
Katherine |
Davey |
Fragile |
Helen |
de Búrca |
Hovitch and Boskovsky |
Barrie |
de Lara |
Sleeping Dogs |
Beth |
Ditson |
Power of Attorney |
Freda |
Donoghue |
Eagle Soaring |
Natalie |
Dovkants |
An Atheist’s Prayer |
Ryan |
Dunne |
Sin |
Gina |
Eddison |
Some Days Even the Goldfish |
Gina |
Eddison |
One. Two, Three, Four, Five . . . |
Gina |
Eddison |
Time |
Gina |
Eddison |
The Fall |
Gina |
Eddison |
Siren |
Gina |
Eddison |
Ginger Snaps |
Linda |
Edwards |
The Road to Aragon and Triolet |
Michael |
Elias |
The Third Stroke |
KM |
Elkes |
He writes |
Travis |
Elsum |
Two Lost Souls |
tracey |
emerson |
Drive All Night |
Alan |
Falkingham |
Mottled Light |
Juliana |
Feaver |
Roses Smell Like Fear |
Olivia |
Fitzsimons |
Caravaggio |
Stephen |
Flanagan |
Suir River Bridge |
aingeala |
flannery |
Dolores |
Mary |
Fox |
Gilgamesh ward |
Mary |
Fox |
Plenty of Time, Joan |
Jane |
Fraser |
The Empress Strikes Back |
Peter |
Freckleton |
Love in the Age of Porn |
Jon |
Fried |
Kebab and Fried Aubergine |
Dean |
Gessie |
Brew |
Pia |
Ghosh Roy |
Cocktail |
Mark |
Godfrey |
Guilt |
Robert |
Golding |
The Interrogator |
Robert |
Golding |
People Like Us |
Pippa |
Griffin |
Kicking Like Billy-Oh |
ledlowe |
guthrie |
The Intruder |
Christopher |
HALL |
The Forgiveness of Sand |
Robert |
Hamilton |
Cereal and Fire |
Holli |
Harms |
You Scratch My Back |
Wayne |
Herbert |
Psittacus Erithacus |
Percy |
Herbert |
Blood on the Cross |
Euwan |
Hodgson |
42C |
Patrick |
Holloway |
Gingerbread |
Anthony |
Howcroft |
Milfoil |
Charleen |
Hurtubise |
The Funeral |
Gavin |
Jackson |
As Yet Untitled |
Ingrid |
Jendrzejewski |
Eva Sturm |
Martin |
Keating |
Amor Fati |
Rose |
Keating |
Your Dream Life Come True |
Kevin |
Keely |
Waiting for the Russians |
Stella |
Klein |
Freight |
Jen |
Knox |
The Plagiarist |
David |
Krasner |
What Happened Tomorrow |
James |
Lawless |
Pero’s Promise |
Tamara |
Lazaroff |
True Colours |
karen |
lethlean |
Typecasting |
Morag |
Lewis |
A Silvery Fish |
Julie |
Liston |
On the way to Frida Kahlo’s House |
Helen |
Macrae |
The Apple of His Eye |
Deirdre |
Manning |
After The Bomb |
Vincent |
Marmion |
The Henry Effect |
Tracy |
Maylath |
The Sea Beyond |
Kevin |
Mc Dermott |
Michael L Straight from Hell |
Maisie |
McAdoo |
Bloo Red |
Peter |
McClelland |
Lizaveta Lives a Little |
Ruth |
McConnell |
THE FLOWER AND THE SERPENT |
Lisa |
McDonald |
Beachcomber |
Connor |
McElwee |
Sticks and Stones |
Judith |
McGinn |
The boat from Dun Laoghaire |
Mark |
McGlynn |
The Devil’s Kiss |
Rachel |
McHale |
The Gospel Truth |
Barbara |
McKeon |
One-legged Seagulls |
Wayne |
Mconie |
TRESPASS |
Katayoun |
Medhat |
LAYBY LULLABY |
Katayoun |
Medhat |
The Natural |
Paul |
Mitchell |
Beatitudes |
Janet |
Moore |
Loveoid |
J |
Morin |
Ruby Mine |
Virginia |
Mortenson |
The Fish |
Helen E. |
Mundler |
The Return of Waldo Jeffers |
Gavin |
Murphy |
Machine Gun Mickey |
Gavin |
Murphy |
Herr Siegfried Ottmar |
Thiva |
Narayanan |
living the dream |
Martin |
Nathan |
Plunging into Peru |
Helen |
Newdick |
Clean |
Giles |
Newington |
Clean |
Giles |
Newington |
THE LAST HURRAH |
Cláir |
Ní Aonghusa |
Sunglasses |
Stephanie |
Norgate |
Light Rising from Below |
Sophie |
Nussle |
Art For Local People |
Francis |
O’Connor |
Elizabeth’s Kitchen |
Eileen |
O’Donoghue |
Magma |
Mary |
O’Shea |
SNAP SNAP BABY |
Kate |
Oriol |
the pin |
G. L. |
Osborne |
Mutton Curry |
Richard |
Philip |
Owl Jacket |
Antonia |
Phinnemore |
Stroke |
Laura |
Post |
Home |
Ian |
Priestley |
Take Her Fishing |
John |
Pringle |
Snow Bound |
Clarrie |
Pringle |
LUNCH BREAK |
Anne |
Rabbitt |
The Public Record |
David |
Rea |
THE EULOGISTS |
ALEX |
REECE |
Someone Steps In |
Suzanne |
Rivecca |
ONE MORE CHANCE TO DANCE |
Jean |
Roarty |
Whisht up a while will you! |
John |
Rodgers |
Mrs Browning’s legacy |
Peter |
Rodgers |
Whisht up a while will you! |
John |
Rodgers |
Breaking News |
Gregory |
Rosenstock |
War from the Words |
David |
Rubenstein |
Gutless Living |
Natalie |
Rule |
Cranberry Sauce |
EC |
Seaman |
The Triumph of Renee Sorenson |
Andrew |
Shakespeare |
A Watch For Christmas, Not For Life |
Andrew |
Shakespeare |
A Light in the Green Woods |
RAYMOND |
SHEEHAN |
Tracing the World |
RAYMOND |
SHEEHAN |
Papillon |
Jo |
Sinclair |
What You Don’t Know |
Tracey |
Slaughter |
Storybook |
Emma |
Smith-Stevens |
An Ounce of Truth |
Penn |
Spell |
Ambush |
Jo |
Spencely |
A Blue Silk Scarf |
Meri |
Spencer |
U-156 |
Kate |
Spitzmiller |
Empty Nest |
Malaika Rose |
Stanley |
Independence Day |
Jenny |
Steel |
Last Sortie |
PJ |
Stephenson |
MilkEyed Mender |
Kerry |
Swash |
A Fair Bargain |
Robert |
Temple |
Little Holocausts |
Susan |
Tepper |
Crosshouse |
Eleanor |
Thom |
Kissing a Goldfish |
Eve |
Turner |
Fractions |
Gabriel |
Valjan |
Becky and the Devil in an Act of Creative Destruction |
Cady |
Vishniac |
JUST GIVING |
Jennie |
Walmsley |
The Old graveyard |
S D |
West |
Gabardine |
david |
wilkes |
The Thrill of the Chase |
Rick |
Williams |
Fair and Square |
Alison |
Withey |
There is a spectre |
Christopher |
Young |