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Short Story Prize 2024/25: RESULTS

Winners

Short-list

Long-list

 

On behalf of all of us at Fish, congratulations to all of you who made the long and the short-lists. 

Sean Lusk

Judge: Sean Lusk

The 10 winners will be published in the Fish Anthology 2025. See Sean’s comments on the winning stories below.

The launch will take place during the West Cork Literary Festival, Bantry, Ireland. Festival dates are 11 – 18 July, the launch date to be confirmed.
Venue: Marino Church. The launch is a free event and all are welcome.

(There were 1,175 entries to the competition.)

 


 

First Prize:

Jay McKenzie
Fish Short Story Winner 2026

This is London, baby  by Jay McKenzie

 

 

 

Second Prize:

Robin Booth

The Making of Us  by Robin Booth

 

 

 

Third Prize:

Hannah Fluer Fitz Rankin

Top Line  by Hannah-Fleur Fitz-Rankin 

 

 

 

Honorary Mentions (no particular order):

 

Jo SteinMy Dead Mother by Jo Stein

 

 

Mohini Singh
The Only Dalit in the Village 
 by Mohini Singh

 

 

Sore Winner  by David RalphDavid Ralph

 

 

Linda ChaseKeeping Cool  by Linda Chase   

 

 

Nicola Schofield
Lonely Meets Lonely 
 by Nicola Schofield     

 

 

Barry Brophy
Entrophy
  by Barry Brophy

 

 

Rand Richards Cooper
Fiasco
  by Rand Richards Cooper

 

 

 

SEAN LUSK’S COMMENTS on the ten winning stories:

Stories taking us from an Indian earthquake to a sweltering New York, and from the awkwardness of middle-aged dating to highly believable hauntings of one sort or another, the shortlisted stories all show a confidence of writing voice and originality of approach that makes them shine.

Fiasco is a beautifully realised story of a newly married young couple in 1950s New England on their honeymoon. I wanted to read on – perhaps because this felt more like an opening to a novel than a short story.

Entropy is a clever, playful story of a physics lecturer who takes an English course that prompts him to ponder all the ways in which entropy affects his life. I really admired the way

Lonely Meets Lonely used its structure to give us great sympathy for all the characters in this story of dating in late middle age, and the pressing human need to make connection. Deftly done.

I loved the voice in Keeping Cool, as a New Yorker who knows he’s being a fool tries to instal an air-conditioner in his run-down apartment with predictable (but not too predictable) results.

Sore Winner is told in the convincing voice of an unreliable narrator, whose spiky relationship with his younger brother has murky origins. We, the reader, share fully in his disturbing self-realisation.

The Only Dalit in the Village has a wonderfully timeless quality. In many ways a parable, it handles every character with touching sympathy. Perfectly paced, and admirably controlled, this is writing of great assurance.

My Dead Mother captured me completely with its whip-smart narrative voice, its wholly convincing haunting by the dead mother, its crackling humour and perfect twist. An absolute delight.

Top Line moved me, a story of two widowers, brothers-in-law, who are preparing to dance with each other at a ballroom competition, it is, appropriately enough, a masterclass in the choreography of the short story. Every touch, gesture and look is applied with the skill of a watercolourist. Beautiful.

The Making of Us is set in an English boarding school in the not-so-distant past and subtly establishes a deep sense of unease, the young narrator’s voice not fully grasping what we as a reader can understand all too well. The massed schoolboys are like a threatening army, their strange ululations adding to the gathering certainty that something terrible is going to happen. This has the quality of a classic. It is a story with a haunting quality, if not a ghost.

This is London, Baby is wholly its own thing. The writing fizzes and flames with originality, honesty and a kind of self-outrage. Here we follow the messy life of a woman from hedonistic clubbing in the nineties when she is eighteen to a sober assessment of all its highs and lows when she is in her mid-forties. It leaves us pondering all that she has not told us and, like the very best short stories, the feeling that we have been given a glimpse of a character’s true soul. The language is startling, fierce and singular. Truly outstanding.

 

BIOGRAPHIES of Winning Authors

Jay McKenzie swapped the North East coast for Greece, Indonesia, Singapore, Australia and South Korea.  Her weakness is knitwear and she lives with her husband, daughter and too many cardigans. If spotted without a cup of tea in hand, it is likely that she is sending a distress signal and the relevant authorities should be contacted with haste. How to Lose the Lottery will be published with HarperFiction in Spring 2026.

Robin Booth is a writer and editor from Stroud, Gloucestershire. He was sent to boarding school at the age of eight, in circumstances that were very different from those in his story. His work has been published by Stroud Short Stories and Ad Hoc Fiction, and his stories have received prizes at the Bath Short Story and Mairtín Crawford Awards. He is a member of the Wild Writers group in Stroud.

Hannah-Fleur is a novelist and short story writer, represented by Nicole Etherington at Blake Friedmann. Her short fiction has been published in the Bridport Anthology, a previous Fish Anthology, and Blackfriars Books. She was longlisted for the BBC Short Story Award 2022. She has an MA from Goldsmiths in Creative Writing and works at the Natural History Museum. Her first stories were about woodland animals, all ending the same way: …they went to bed, tired but happy.

Jo Stein lives on the Hudson River in Harlem, close enough to walk to the school where she teaches 8th graders how to write and a couple of blocks from City College where she got her MFA. Every now and then her husband threatens to give away books that pile up in the apartment. Stein is terrified her students will read her stories on the internet. 

MOHINI SINGH studied Computer Science at Cambridge and worked as a software engineer for eight years before deciding it was not the career for her. She took evening classes in creative writing, completing a diploma in Novel Writing from Birkbeck. She has been published in the Bridport Anthology and The Good Journal. In her free time she learns Japanese in the hope to one day be able to read Haruki Murakami.

David Ralph’s stories and essays have been published in Dublin Review, Banshee, New Irish Writing, Southword, Litro, and the Irish Independent. He won a New Irish Writing award in 2020, and his memoir piece ‘Two Bastards’ was placed third in the Fish Memoir Prize in 2022. In 2024 he was shortlisted for the Francis McManus Short Story Award, and his story ‘Turncoat’ was broadcast on RTE Radio 1. 

Linda Chase was born in New York City and currently lives in the bucolic Hudson River town of Rhinebeck, NY. Her writing career includes several books on art and a suspense novel. Excerpts from her memoir The Suicide Gene, earned her a Fellowship in Nonfiction Literature from The New York Foundation for the Arts. Fiction/Memoir! Memoir/Fiction! While teaching Creative Writing at Pace University she is trying to find enough time to write both!

Nicola Schofield is a writer from Salford.  She has written for theatre and TV, including plays for children and community projects.  She won a Bruntwood Prize at Royal Exchange Theatre in 2004 and currently teaches Playmaking at the University of Manchester.  Her mum is from Ireland and was born in a village named Hospital, County Limerick.  Nicola has no pets, and that is perhaps a failing. She lives with her family in Greater Manchester.

Barry Brophy was born and lives in Dublin where he works as an engineering and technical communication lecturer at UCD. He has been writing all his life; factually about Laurel and Hardy, sitcoms and making presentations; and fictionally in several unpublished (as yet) novels. The common factor in all of this is a fascination with dialogue, and his influences in this regard include Evelyn Waugh, Muriel Spark and Steptoe & Son.

Rand Richards Cooper lives in Connecticut and is the author of two works of fiction, The Last to Go and Big As Life. As essayist and journalist he has covered an alarming range of topics, from coed locker rooms to Botox parties, the wonders of the F-word, the search for lost WW II submarines, the origins of jerk barbecue, and the sexual politics of having your dog neutered. His memoir, “Chess With The Wehrmacht,” won the Fish Short Memoir Prize last year.

 


 

Short-list:

(alphabetical order) There are 35 stories on the short-list. 

 

AUTHOR

TITLE

Aideen Henry

Distributing space

Barry Brophy

Entropy

Bridgett Kendall

An Old Lady And A Different Ol…

Catherine Whelton

Snowmelt

Clare O’Reilly

Tea for Two

Daniel Magnowski

Satan Comes to Churston Ferrer…

David Ralph

Sore Winner

Deirdre Cartmill

Blackwater

Dylan Pritchard

Spirit Level

Elizabeth Cooke

Pretty China

Elizabeth Linklater

The Reckoning of Tristram McKe…

Fionnuala Meehan

The Red Bag

Hannah Fleur Fitz Rankin

Top Line

James Putnam

Appointments

Jay McKenzie

This is London, baby

Jo Stein

My Dead Mother

justine sweeney

Heading South

Karen Ashe

Poisoned

Lesley Bungay

The Shadow Child

Linda Chase

Keeping Cool

Lizzie Golds

Beauty Queens

Maggie Ling

Rosa Felicia

Mohini Singh

The Only Dalit in the Village

Nicola Schofield

Lonely Meets Lonely

Peter Rose

Neon Valentine

Rand Richards Cooper

Fiasco

Ray Stoute

Carnival Dawn

Robin Booth

The Making of Us

Róisín Burke

Bye Benny

Sally Bramley

Waiting for the balloons

Shanley Kearney

Hand in Hand

susan lake

That Shit, Hamlet

Susannah Waters

Brothers

Tabitha Topping

The Artist’s Wife

Thiva Narayanan

A Keralan Horror Story

 


 

Long-list:

(alphabetical order)

There are 99 stories in the long-list. 

AUTHOR

TITLE

Aideen Henry

Distributing space

Alison Froggatt

The Visitors

Allen Shadow

The Moment

Amy Ferguson

Da Capo (From the Beginning)

Andrew Laurence

A Christmas Gift

Anna Smajdor

Upload

Arthur Wright

Unique Forms of Continuity in Space

Barry Brophy

Entropy

Brendan Dempsey

The Parcel

Bridgett Kendall

An Old Lady And A Different Old Lady

Bruce Alexander

MIRACLE

Catherine Whelton

Snowmelt

CEMILE GULDAL

The Savior

Charlotte Cole

1995

Clare O’Reilly

Tea for Two

COLETTE WILLIS

This Little Tent of Blue

Cristina Alvarez Ortiz

Don’t think of Kimberli

Daniel Magnowski

Satan Comes to Churston Ferrers

David Ralph

Sore Winner

Deirdre Cartmill

Blackwater

Dylan Pritchard

Spirit Level

Eliza Mood

One Last Move

Elizabeth Cooke

Pretty China

Elizabeth Linklater

The Reckoning of Tristram McKellen

Elizabeth Nichol

Truly

Elizabeth Whyatt

Another Country

Emmy Holman

Red Squirrel and Rusty Nail

Enda Wyley

Too Far

Evan Morgan Williams

Roster

Fiona Birkbeck

Derry Girl

Fionnuala Meehan

The Red Bag

Gary Grace

THIS IS A VOLUNTARY ADMISSION

Geoff Mead

Jeux D’Amour

Gillian Metheringham

Nylon Knickers

Hal Ackerman

The One That Isn’t Moving

Hannah Fleur Fitz Rankin

Top Line

Ingrid Keenan

Smile

Itto and Mekiya Outini

The House of Dust

Jack Kennedy

Cosmos in Collapse

Jack Z

Eclipse

Jaime Gill

Mysterious Rooms

James Ellis

Last Days

James Putnam

Appointments

Jay McKenzie

This is London, baby

Jillian Laux

Reconciled

Jo Stein

My Dead Mother

John Langan

Many are Called

John Merkel

Not Even for a Song

Justine Sweeney

Heading South

Karen Ashe

Poisoned

Keelan Gallagher

I Found In Me A Gloomy Wood

Keith Johnson

The Drum and the Bell

Kevin Noel Power

A fresh Start

Kevin Noel Power

Stephen Hawking’s Dog

L.J. SEXTON

Nae use cryin’ o’er spilt milk

Lauren Alonso Miller

Clive From Kirk Ella

Lesley Bungay

The Shadow Child

Linda Chase

Keeping Cool

Lizzie Golds

Beauty Queens

Lizzie Golds

Trigger

Louise Mangos

Home is Where

Maggie Ling

Rosa Felicia

Mark de Rond

WWJD

Mary White

Downsizing

Matthew Haynes

These are Private Joys

Matthew Haynes

When Considering the Stars

Michael Button

When I Was A Doll I Had A Boy

Mohini Singh

The Only Dalit in the Village

Nathan Power

The Worries

Nicola Schofield

Lonely Meets Lonely

Ofelia Orko

A Woman of No Apartment

Paul Hammond

Night Work

Paula Harnois

Medea

Peter Rose

Neon Valentine

PJ Lemer

Victim

Rachel Ephraim

The Need in Her Eyes

Rand Richards Cooper

Fiasco

Ray Stoute

Carnival Dawn

Robin Booth

The Making of Us

Róisín Burke

Bye Benny

Ronan O’Halloran

Speak No Evil

Rosalind Minett

Caretaker

Ruth Guthrie

Intaglio

Sally Bramley

Waiting for the balloons

Seamus Scanlon

The Blue Wide Open

Seth Gannon

A Good Outcome

Shanley Kearney

Hand in Hand

Simon Roberts

Letters & Scraps

Solomon Jessie

One Minute She’s Hera

Sophie Burkham

That Was Then, This Is Now

Stefani Nellen

Twin Friendship (Ivan)

Susan Lake

That Shit, Hamlet

Susannah Waters

Brothers

Susie Goldsbrough

Thankful

Tabitha Topping

The Artist’s Wife

Thiva Narayanan

A Keralan Horror Story

Tom Kiernan

Brother Mine

Toril Cooper

Honey

Tracy Smith

The Keepers of the Words

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