On behalf of all of us at Fish, congratulations to all of you who made the long and the short-lists.
Apologies for the delay in this announcement.
Judge, Sarah Hall
The 10 winners will be published in the Fish Anthology 2024.
The launch will be during the West Cork Literary Festival, Bantry, Ireland – 15 July. Venue: Marino Church, 6.30 pm. It is a free event and all are welcome.
(There were 1,256 entries to the competition.)
First Prize:
Second Sight by Alison Fields
Second Prize:
The Other Life by Eve Thomson
Third Prize:
Continuity Error by Ewan Gault
Honorary Mentions (no particular order):
Cargo by Cath Sampson
The Liberating Death of Freedom by Joshua Davis
The Nail House by Amanda Hildebrandt
My da’s a Hero by Laura Kyle
The Púca’s Share by Monica Corish
Polishing The Silence by Rowland Cooke
Derry Blue by Garret Dwyer Joyce
Sarah Hall’s comments on the ten winning stories:
Winner – Second Sight
What a wonderful, fully-rounded and gripping story this is! The characterisations, landscaping and the drama are so well calibrated; it feels like a vivid, compressed, atmospheric world, with humane and dynamic personalities inside that have histories and emotional complexity. All the component parts work well together. The prose is beautiful, perfectly-gaged, tense, clean, suited to both place and character; the descriptions are both astute and evocative. It’s a very rewarding read, and it utterly transported me while reading – I forgot where I was completely! – appealing to all the senses, visually stimulating, and page-turning.
Second Place – The Other Life
This is a really intelligent, coruscating, witty piece of writing that skilfully uses the very compelling and entertaining voice of its main character to explore family relationships, history, gender dynamics and the drama/art controversy set up by its premise. The story unfolds really skilfully and surprisingly. This author has a brilliant talent for narrative voice and intrigue, and an ability to create strangeness and disquiet (the operating keys of the form), and to move the reader without being sentimental.
Third Place – Continuity Error
A fantastic, very atmospheric tale, that is both funny and tragic. The drama is really well contained, with a sense of context around it – a hinterland – which is a sign of a writer who really understand the form of the short story, what to include, and what to allude to. I loved the use of the demotic, and the language and descriptions – the metaphors especially – are so well written. The choice of subject is unusual, marginal, and very well handled. Much admiration for this writer.
Runners Up:
Cargo –
A very well written story, with a neat community drama inside, an interesting shift of narrative perspectives, and careful handling of history.
The Liberating Death of Freedom –
This is a skilfully handled story, that keeps a lid on the tension and keeps a steady, suitable, almost detached tone throughout, which, by the end of the story, comes into its own and pays dividends.
The Nail House –
A super, smart, colourful and playfully linguistic tale, which is a riot to read and uses its odder qualities to brilliant ends.
My da’s A Hero –
A great attempt at a story with driving plot, using political troubles and character conflict to create a small crucible of tension, intrigue and revelation.
The Puca’s Share –
Loved the creativity and playful inventiveness of this story, which lands somewhere between adult & children’s fiction and has a real sense of folkloric verve and moral engagement to it.
Polishing The Silence –
A compelling, subversive story, that takes on disquieting subject matter, human flaws and breaking points, and walks a tricky line with them using cleverly understated prose.
Derry Blue –
A melancholy, cleanly written story about trauma, the loneliness of grief, and how the aftermath of damage and loss has no neat ending.
(alphabetical order) There are 46 stories on the short-list.
Alex Rourke |
Amphibian |
Alison Fields |
Second Sight |
Amanda Hildebrandt |
The Nail House |
Cathy Sampson |
Cargo |
Chloe Banks |
Blighty One |
Clayton Bradshaw |
The Two Things Blassie Knows |
Dale Marie |
Shadow Companions |
Dan Micklethwaite |
Like Everest Maybe, or El Capitan |
David Smith |
Kintsugi |
deirdre devally |
The Inquest |
Donna Brown |
Suddenly, and with Flowers |
Elizabeth Whyatt |
Another Country |
Elizabeth Whyatt |
Indigo Shore |
Eve Thomson |
The Other Life |
Ewan Gault |
Continuity Error |
Garret Dwyer Joyce |
Derry Blue |
Jay McKenzie |
Hairdressing Tips for Ugly Girls |
Joshua Davis |
The Liberating Death of Freedom |
Julian Wakeling |
Greetings From LA |
Justine Busto |
Espejo Majico |
Kyleigh Leddy |
Perpetual Sunset |
Laura Kyle |
My da’s a Hero |
Lesley Bannatyne |
Coaxing Sugar From the Trees |
Liam Keller |
Fill Your Pockets With Stones |
Liz Houchin |
Fluorescent Blues |
Liza Hartley |
The Sound of the Pigs |
Lorcan Byrne |
The Egret |
Maggie Ling |
The Last Time I Saw Richard |
Marc Joan |
Golden Mummy |
Mark Johnson |
All Good |
Martin Costello |
Eddie Grouse |
Matilda KIME |
REST |
Max Youngman |
WHITE RABBITS |
Monica Corish |
The Púca’s Share |
Natasha Hutcheson |
Gill Drayton’s Plunder – a Scrapbook |
Niamh Mac Cabe |
The Third Beagle |
Rachel Bowman |
Help for Kitty Hopkins’ Nerves |
Ronan Ryan |
Ghoul |
Rowland Cooke |
Polishing the Silence |
Rupert Dastur |
Love, at the Deepest Point |
sean coffey |
Academic Affairs |
Shamaine Loo |
The Second Can Wait |
Sheila Killian |
Flight |
Sofie De Smyter |
Q&A |
Thomas Gabrielson |
NOT THAT EASY |
Vincent Barton |
HAPAX LEGOMENON |
(alphabetical order)
There are 134 stories in the long-list.
Adam Oliver |
La Hora Azul |
Alex Rourke |
Amphibian |
Alexander Cullen |
Do They Know It’s Christmas? |
Alice Murray |
Greta |
Alison Fields |
Second Sight |
AM Ruiz Zepeda |
Leopard Seals |
Amanda Garrie |
Leaving the Sea |
Amanda Hildebrandt |
No Safe Place |
Amanda Hildebrandt |
The Nail House |
Andrew Hanson |
In Place of Ashes |
Ann Landi |
Three Women |
Anna Linstrum |
He Sits Amid His Finery |
Ben James |
Animal Spirits |
Benedict Pignatelli |
A Murder of Crows |
Bill Zaget |
The Enfolding Space |
Cathy Sampson |
Cargo |
Charles Cooper |
Pas Si Prêt à Porter (Not So Ready to Wear) |
Chloe Banks |
Blighty One |
Clayton Bradshaw |
The Two Things Blassie Knows |
Dale Marie |
Shadow Companions |
Dan Micklethwaite |
Like Everest Maybe, or El Capitan |
Dan Winterson |
About Now Sounds Right |
Daniel Larbi |
Board of Governors of Shepherd High School |
David Smith |
Kintsugi |
deirdre devally |
The Inquest |
Dennis McNamara |
By Sea By Land |
Donna Brown |
Suddenly, and with Flowers |
Dylan Pritchard |
Vergogna |
Edward Fry |
Best of Three |
Elaine McCluskey |
Father Eduardo |
Elizabeth Whyatt |
Another Country |
Elizabeth Whyatt |
Indigo Shore |
emily grabham |
Joy Lane |
Emily Ruth Ford |
See Me |
Emma Penruddock |
The Shape of an S |
Esme Gutch |
The Only Truth She Knows is Pa… |
Evan Boyer |
Smuggling Seminar for the Elderly and Disabled |
Eve Thomson |
The Other Life |
Ewan Gault |
Continuity Error |
Feargal Ó Dubhghaill |
My Quizmaster Voice |
Finn Dignan |
The Standstill |
Frances Gapper |
Mrs Foxglove |
Garret Dwyer Joyce |
Derry Blue |
Gill Gregory |
The Speck In Her Eye |
Guy Mitchell |
Saver Girl |
Hilary Bell |
Cliffs |
hugh mccormack |
Keep Spinning |
Jack Z |
Hurling |
James Lee |
Ed |
Jane Dabate |
Garbage |
Jay McKenzie |
Hairdressing Tips for Ugly Girls |
Jennifer Bailey |
A Fish Story |
Jessica White |
Esther |
Jim O’Connor |
Et in Arcadia |
John Fullman |
Luck…A Long Covid Weekend |
Jon Stapley |
No Exceptions |
Joshua Davis |
The Liberating Death of Freedom |
Julian Wakeling |
Greetings From LA |
Juliet Hill |
In the Doorway |
Justine Busto |
Espejo Majico |
justine sweeney |
Coins in My Fist |
Katrina Moinet |
Borderline Discomfort |
Kate Lockwood Jefford |
Dead Friend’s Coat |
Kieran Marsh |
BLESSED IS THE FRUIT OF YOUR WOMB |
Kyleigh Leddy |
Perpetual Sunset |
Laura Kyle |
My da’s a Hero |
Lesley Bannatyne |
Coaxing Sugar From the Trees |
Liam Keller |
Fill Your Pockets With Stones |
Lindsay Gillespie |
Window Dressing |
Liz Houchin |
Fluorescent Blues |
Liza Hartley |
The Sound of the Pigs |
Lorcan Byrne |
Rock Dove |
Lorcan Byrne |
Scallop Shell |
Lorcan Byrne |
The Egret |
Louis Hall |
Album Track |
M.G. Eugene |
Through the Waves of a Melody |
Maggie Harris |
Under the crab-apple tree |
Maggie Ling |
The Last Time I Saw Richard |
Marc Joan |
Golden Mummy |
Marc Joan |
The Law of the Little Fishes |
Marc Joan |
The Year That Nothing Comes |
Marco Patitucci |
Love Means Nothing |
Marion Quednau |
Pairs of Shoes |
Mark de Rond |
Summer in Southwark |
Mark Johnson |
All Good |
Martin Costello |
Eddie Grouse |
Martin Daly |
Deora Dé |
Mary Black |
The Thaw |
Mary Black |
Her Handsome Prints |
Mary Shovelin |
The White March |
Matilda KIME |
REST |
Max Youngman |
WHITE RABBITS |
Megan Jennaway |
Radio Hour |
Michael Males |
Acquired Daughter |
Michelle Crowell |
The Drama of an Unwanted Separation |
Monica Corish |
The Púca’s Share |
nada marjanovich |
The Leftovers |
Natalie Southworth |
The Pocket Book |
Natasha Hutcheson |
Gill Drayton’s Plunder – A Scrapbook |
Niamh Mac Cabe |
The Third Beagle |
Nick Okapi |
Ministry of Justification |
Nikki Barrowclough |
Once…. |
Nina Cullinane |
The Fort |
Oscar Maloney Hill |
Peel |
Patricia Mullin |
Hush |
Paul Bassett Davies |
Fit |
Paul Buchheit |
Crayon Games |
Penny Frances |
Exposure |
Penny Simpson |
Until your wild world ends |
Peter Hankins |
Nemo Kizh – the Fight Against Beauty |
Peter Rodgers |
One last flirtation |
Peter Rose |
Illegal Aliens |
Phil Cummins |
Mug |
Rachel Bowman |
Help for Kitty Hopkins’ Nerves |
Rina Soloveitchik |
Her Wholeness |
Robert Daseler |
A Dictionary of Loneliness |
Ronan Ryan |
Ghoul |
Ronnie Greig |
The Night They Bombed Belfast |
Rosey Darbishire |
S.W.A.L.K |
Rowland Cooke |
Polishing the Silence |
Rupert Dastur |
Love, at the Deepest Point |
S A Lunn |
We’re Not Getting Divorced |
Sara Roberts |
Seed |
sean coffey |
Academic Affairs |
Shamaine Loo |
The Second Can Wait |
Shamaine Loo |
The Spider Spirits |
Shannon Savvas |
The Resurrection of Michalis Charalambous |
Sharryn Ryan |
Bespangling Every Bough |
Sheila Killian |
Flight |
Sofie De Smyter |
Q&A |
Sophie James |
Substitutes |
Stephen Flanagan |
The Roboticist |
Susan Wigmore |
OTHER |
Tina Cameron |
Reckless Redemption |
Thomas Gabrielson |
BLANK PAGE |
Thomas Gabrielson |
NOT THAT EASY |
Tracey Shillito |
Reunion |
vincent Barton |
HAPAX LEGOMENON |
Will Maclean |
Quantitative Easing |
Ximena Escobar de Nogales |
AN INFLATABLE HERO |
Zandra Carrington |
Maurice and Finnian |