On behalf of all of us at Fish, congratulations to the 10 winners, and to those who made the short and long lists.
I was delighted to find so many skilled pieces in the entries this year, stories that
were gem-like, compressed and glinting . . . Sarah Hall
Sarah Hall
Selected by Sarah Hall
The 10 winners will be published in the Fish Anthology 2023.
(There were 1,392 entries to the competition.)
First: |
Letty Butler (Sheffield, UK) |
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Second: |
Nicholas Petty (UK / Amsterdam) | ![]() |
Third: Autophile |
Dylan Garity (New York) | ![]() |
Endangered |
Roger Vickery (Australia) |
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Fur | Allegra A Mullan (London) | ![]() |
Hitch | Emma Neale (New Zealand) | ![]() |
Readmission | Josephine Rowe (Australia) | |
The Parts He Missed | Joshua Wagner. (USA / West Cork) | ![]() |
The Thing Adored | Hanako Senzoku (Japan) | ![]() |
The Watch Case | Hanako Senzoku (Japan) | ![]() |
Reading short stories is one of the most nerve-wracking experiences. You never know
what you are going to get as a reader, and as a critic. This is not just because they
showcase disquiet, tension, subversion and surprise, but because the form itself is so
difficult, so exacting, even punishing to attempt, and it remains, very often, an un-
mastered discipline.
But I was delighted to find so many skilled pieces in the entries this year, stories that
were gem-like, compressed and glinting, little worlds in entirety that refracted life and
ideas, and created a hinterland around their borders. Pieces that were written by
authors who really understood short story metrics – economy, traction, mood,
schematics, potency, negative space, and irresolution.
I was also heartened to experience a variety of themes and styles, because the form,
for all its limits, is oddly flexible, open to innovation, experimentation and originality,
a staging ground for a host of topics and landscapes and human goings-on. It is hard
to summarize these entries, other than to say, as always, existentialist DNA was deep
there, from which a myriad of ideas, tales and explorations branched out.
What a joy! What a joy to experience in these stories the many versions of us, told in
so many different ways, small episodes pushing up against big themes, propositions
and provocations that expand any restrictions we might make for ourselves, socially,
politically, or textually. What a joy to be transported to so many different places
around the globe, and into speculative futures, and back into the disputable past.
Yes, the reading was truly nerve-wracking, but for all the right reasons.
Letty Butler is a writer, actress, comedienne, creative coach and chronically indecisive. She’s based in a tiny flat in Sheffield, writes across multiple genres and has just finished her debut novel, Escape Artists. Letty’s always got multiple projects on the bubble due to a low boredom threshold. She’s currently working on her debut collection of short fiction and is developing a 12-part comedy series for screen, alongside award-winning director, Juliet May (Motherland, Miranda).
Nicholas Petty is a British writer living in Utrecht, the Netherlands. His short fiction has previously been listed for the Sunday Times Audible Short Story Award and the Galley Beggar Press Short Story Prize, and has appeared in The Moth, The London Magazine, Short Fiction Journal, and elsewhere. When he’s not at his desk, he can be found on a sunny terrace with a plate of bitterballen and a tiny Dutch beer.
Dylan Garity is a writer and editor originally from Oregon, currently living in Brooklyn, New York. As a spoken word poet, he has toured around the United States, performing at a wide variety of venues and winning the college national poetry slam with Macalester College. He cofounded and served as vice president of Button Poetry for many years, and now works as a freelance fiction editor. “Autophile” is his first published short story.
Roger Vickery rescued this story from a shelter. From the jump, it whined, barked, scratched, and shat out demands to be re-located to a sunny home. Drawing on his multi-vocational (ADHD?) background Roger employed marketing wiles, legal arguments, military tactics, teaching aids and sailing tacks to up-sell the ingrate. Failure. Then he remembered The Fish. They’re a soft touch… accepted his poetry pup in 2015… maybe they’re open to a new stray?
Allegra Mullan is twenty-two years old and lives in North London. She has had work published in the Keats Shelley review, the Penguin First Story anthology, the 2016 Foyles Young Poets anthology, and Rotters Magazine. When she is not on her phone, Allegra enjoys watching film trailers and walking. She is currently studying Creative Writing at Goldsmiths and working as a chef.
Emma Neale lives and works in Dunedin, New Zealand, as a freelance editor and occasional creative writing tutor. The published author of novels, poetry and short fiction, she is also the mother of two sons. Her husband works as a theoretical physicist; her sons like to say this family background of ‘physics and poetry’ has clearly led directly to their own divergent passions: jazz percussion and basketball.
Josephine Rowe is the author of three story collections and a novel, A Loving, Faithful Animal, published in the UK by Tuskar Rock Press. She was a 2021-2022 fellow at the New York Public Library’s Cullman Centre for Scholars and Writers, and a 2022 Writer in Residence at Literaturhaus Zürich. She has recently returned to Australia and is living in coastal Victoria, working on a new novel and sleep. Her latest collection of stories is Here Until August.
Josh Wagner spent his early years in California before his folks dragged him off to Montana, where he learned to love a bit of solitude. He has a Masters in Creative Writing from the University of Edinburgh, and is currently living in West Cork working on a baffling PhD concerning forests, grief, embodiment and spectrality. He dabbles in music, filmmaking and theatre, but the art of fiction will always be his first and most abiding love.
Hanako Senzoku has spent half her life in Melbourne, Australia and half as a returnee in Tokyo, Japan – her sense of what constitutes a barbeque is a present source of consternation, and writing an ever-guiding star. She is perpetually filled with wonder and confusion, and an appetite for delicious things.
(alphabetical order) There are 45 stories on the short-list. (There were 1,392 entries in total).
Title |
First Name |
Last Name |
Hanna. With Two Ns. |
Peter-Adrian |
Altini |
Borrowed Bones |
Rita |
Ariyoshi |
Binoculars |
Alex |
Baines |
How to rescue a cat |
Liz |
Barnard |
The Martyr’s Brother |
Paul |
Bassett Davies |
The Jewelled Sea |
Paul |
Bassett Davies |
Mobile |
Maryanne |
Berry |
The Approximate Distance in Light Years Between Us |
Mike |
Carson |
Pomegranate |
RAND RICHARDS |
COOPER |
Mending Wall |
Mark |
Edwards |
Karma |
Mark |
Edwards |
500 Internal Server Error |
Nikki |
England |
The End of Pi |
Andrew |
Gardiner |
Autophile |
Dylan |
Garity |
What Lies Within |
M |
Gethins |
Buddies |
Emily |
Grabham |
Christmas Magic? |
Peter |
Greenwood |
Deliverance |
Lauren |
Guastella |
To Brighten a Dull Wing |
Ruth |
Guthrie |
Hello Hell |
Maurice |
Haeems |
The Making of Him |
Alice |
Jolly |
Foxholes |
Seán |
Kenny |
Everything Else Is Afterwards |
Seán |
Kenny |
Hi-Ho The Derry-O |
Suzanne |
McCourt |
Hitch |
Emma |
Neale |
Baby Heart |
Giles |
Newington |
The Outsiders |
Treasa |
O’Brien |
Standard Model |
Fergal |
O’Byrne |
Coccinella magnifica |
A F |
Packer |
ALL IT TAKES |
Pat |
Pickavance |
Release |
Stephanie |
Pollock |
Banana Taffy |
Chad |
Poovey |
Helter Skelter |
Julie |
Rea |
Readmission |
Josephine |
Rowe |
Last Act |
Natalie |
Southworth |
They Come to Me Now and Then in The Dying |
David |
Strickland |
Burgundy Ridges |
Matt |
Surface |
Yoyo |
Carsten |
ten Brink |
Endangered |
Roger |
Vickery |
Roofers |
Roger |
Vickery |
Stay and Hold |
Joshua |
Wagner |
The Parts He Missed |
Joshua |
Wagner |
Last Year’s Fires |
Andrea |
Watts |
Dog |
James |
Wilson |
DELOREAN |
Judith |
Wilson |
(alphabetical order)
There are 135 stories in the long-list. (There were 1,392 entries in total.)
Title |
First Name |
Last Name |
Fur |
Allegra |
A Mullan |
Hanna. With Two Ns. |
Peter-Adrian |
Altini |
Before |
Nancy |
Antle |
Borrowed Bones |
Rita |
Ariyoshi |
Confinement |
Karen |
Ashe |
Binoculars |
Alex |
Baines |
Tamara Ivanovna Talks to Herself |
Jana |
Bakunina |
THE GLASS EATER |
Erika |
Banerji |
How to rescue a cat |
liz |
barnard |
The Martyr’s Brother |
Paul |
Bassett Davies |
The Jewelled Sea |
Paul |
Bassett Davies |
Eli, 2021 |
Mona |
Becker |
The Mourners |
Donald |
Berk |
Mobile |
Maryanne |
Berry |
MIORBHAIL |
Alfreda |
Black |
Lovely Stars |
Hayley |
Blair |
Poetry for the Epilogue |
Kevin |
Broccoli |
Vietnam |
Letty |
Butler |
Chains Like the Sea |
Michael |
Carragher |
The Approximate Distance in |
Mike |
Carson |
Catch a ______ by his Toe |
Stuart |
Chapman |
About the Cat |
Ann |
Collins |
All Life’s Prizes |
Jude |
Cook |
Hot Hex Summer |
Laura |
Cooper |
Pomegranate |
RAND RICHARDS |
COOPER |
The Names of those Lost |
Craig |
Cormick |
Cailleach |
Maureen |
Cullen |
Particles |
Nina |
Cullinane |
Homeless Camping Jump |
Annie |
Dawid |
Touch Pool |
Brooke |
Dunnell |
Mending Wall |
Mark |
Edwards |
Karma |
Mark |
Edwards |
500 Internal Server Error |
Nikki |
England |
Pivot |
Jane |
Finlayson |
Souvenir |
Thomasin |
Finn |
A Shrine for Justin |
Mary |
Fox |
A Category of Kindness |
Soma Mei Sheng |
Frazier |
How Many Feminists Does It Take |
Helena |
Frith Powell |
The End of Pi |
Andrew |
Gardiner |
Autophile |
Dylan |
Garity |
Story of a Book |
Paulo |
Garnsey |
My Sweary Neighbour |
CJ |
Garrow |
Badly Drawn Girl. |
Ruth |
Geldard |
What Lies Within |
M |
Gethins |
Buddies |
Emily |
Grabham |
Christmas Magic? |
Peter |
Greenwood |
Deliverance |
Lauren |
Guastella |
To Brighten a Dull Wing |
Ruth |
Guthrie |
Hello Hell |
Maurice |
Haeems |
The Deer |
Andrea |
Harper |
untitled |
Sarah |
Harte |
King of the Roads |
Aaron |
Hennessy |
Paulina |
Pamela |
Hensley |
Shelley, naked |
Brian |
Hill |
Banana Bread |
Rachael |
Hill |
A Man Who Has Com Through |
Sean |
Hooks |
The Old Snow Country |
Mandy |
Huggins |
The Chef’s Suggestions |
Roger |
Jefferies |
Someday Soon |
Gregory |
Jeffers |
The Making of Him |
Alice |
Jolly |
The Troop Leader |
Brynne |
Jones |
The Bird Warden |
Jupiter |
Jones |
Diamonds and Toads |
Sara |
Keating |
Pupils |
Tyler |
Keevil |
Foxholes |
Seán |
Kenny |
Everything Else Is Afterwards |
Seán |
Kenny |
Silence |
Scott |
Lambridis |
Contrary Motion |
Anna |
Lawrence |
Life in the Caged Jungle |
BV |
Lawson |
Red Sun |
Mary |
Lewis |
KILLING TIME IN ABERYSTWYTH |
Emily |
Macdonald |
Absent Without Leave |
Fiona J |
Mackintosh |
The English Opening |
Camilla |
Macpherson |
Stella |
Emma |
Mather |
The Democracy of Weather |
Tracy |
Maylath |
The Weaver of Tales |
Jillean |
McClory |
Halley’s Comet |
Victor |
McConnell |
Hi-Ho The Derry-O |
Suzanne |
McCourt |
The Unexpected Challenge |
Patrick |
McCusker |
Epilimnion |
Alison |
McGuire |
Breakfast Like a Pauper |
Naci |
Mehmet |
Breakfast |
Naci |
Mehmet |
The Exorcism |
Gillian |
Metheringham |
Knot Wood |
Michael |
Miller |
The Turn |
Philip |
Miller |
Memento Mori |
Pauline |
Milner |
5, 4, 3, 2, 1 |
Konrad |
Muller |
Rats, Stars etc. |
David |
Murray |
Hitch |
Emma |
Neale |
Baby Heart |
Giles |
Newington |
The Outsiders |
Treasa |
O’Brien |
Standard Model |
Fergal |
O’Byrne |
Borneo |
Leanne |
Ogasawara |
“Maroons” |
Alexander |
Ortega |
Coccinella magnifica |
A F |
Packer |
Where the Women Are |
Susan |
Peet |
The Longhouse |
Nicholas |
Petty |
Odds |
Nicholas |
Petty |
ALL IT TAKES |
Pat |
Pickavance |
Release |
Stephanie |
Pollock |
Banana Taffy |
Chad |
Poovey |
Skokie |
Janet |
Price |
The Other Side |
Norah |
Prida Bay |
Helter Skelter |
Julie |
Rea |
She Went There for the Weekend |
Hannah |
Retallick |
The Tender Hand of Faith |
John |
Rex |
Dirty Chicken & Rice |
Simon |
Roberts |
Pipeline |
Alex |
Rourke |
Readmission |
Josephine |
Rowe |
A Parcel of Rogues |
Kerry |
Ryan |
The Thing Adored |
Hanako |
Senzoku |
White Gloss and Sheen |
Hanako |
Senzoku |
The Watch Case |
Hanako |
Senzoku |
Waiting For The Big One |
Catherine |
Shorr |
Buried |
emma |
Shtanichev |
A Weighty Issue |
susan |
smith |
Last Act |
Natalie |
Southworth |
KILL ALL SHAREHOLDERS |
Jon |
Stapley |
They Come to Me Now and Then in The Dying |
David |
Strickland |
Burgundy Ridges |
Matt |
Surface |
Complete strangers |
John |
Taylor |
Yoyo |
Carsten |
ten Brink |
Licked |
Rosalind |
Thomas |
Endangered |
Roger |
Vickery |
Roofers |
Roger |
Vickery |
Stay and Hold |
Joshua |
Wagner |
The Parts He Missed |
Joshua |
Wagner |
Last Year’s Fires |
Andrea |
Watts |
The Flatlands |
Tracey |
Weddle |
The Invisible One |
Pamela |
Wills |
Dog |
James |
Wilson |
DELOREAN |
Judith |
Wilson |
Concerto in F Flat Minor for Oboe and Flute |
scott |
winkler |
The Worst Story |
Mat |
Woolfenden |
The Lonely Daughter of Fabio Penitente |
Anna |
Zaranko |