From all of us at Fish, Congratulations to the writers whose Flash Stories were short or long-listed, and in particular to the 10 winners.
Here are the 10 winning Flash Fiction Stories, as chosen by Tracey Slaughter, to be published in the FISH ANTHOLOGY 2022.
Comments on the flash stories are from Tracey Slaughter, who we sincerely thank for her time and expertise.
FIRST PLACE
The Stone Cottage: by Partridge Boswell
Lyrical pull and enveloping atmosphere distinguished this piece from the first reading, drawing
me into its arresting sensory focus. While understated in terms of narrative action, the dramatic energies of its stonework setting sung, instilling each detail with emotional depth. Its textured, sense-rich approach to sound made its rhythmic sentences and close-range images layered, evocative and rewarding to re-read.
SECOND PLACE
On the Other Side of the World: by Linda Nemec Foster
What attracted me to this piece was how it utilized the dynamics of flash to vibrant structural effect, laying frames of scenic detail cleverly alongside each other to compose a lyric collage of glimpses. What struck me was its skill in capturing brief instants of foreign experience, through an enticing but contained series of images which it left to resonate compellingly.
THIRD PLACE
Millstone: by Z Aaron Young
A dense, disturbing narrative-drive set this piece apart, drawing the reader ever deeper into the meshes of its drama, through to its intensely clever twist. It leads us through the turns of this darkly compelling plot through contained use of dialogue and encounter, making striking use of flash’s minimalism to deliver a honed and high-impact story.
SEVEN HONORABLE MENTIONS (In no particular order)
Crabwalk: by John Walshe
What I found compelling about this piece was its rhythmic energies and attention to sentence tempo and tension to evoke character. Its evocative beat and cleverly timed repetitions delivered a vivid impression of the narrator, keeping the reader ‘jumping big steps’ with its child speaker, and were also skillfully linked to the overall story arc and its dynamic core image-pattern.
Firelight: by Kathryn Henion
The strength of this piece is in its lively mobilizing of setting detail in the service of storytelling. It places us in a vivid slice of landscape through crisp and evocative imagery, and involves us atmospherically in the character’s key childhood glimpse of adult life.
Beauty Curse: by Seamus Scanlon
This piece stood out for its dynamic tone, making skilled use of dialogue and voice to grip the reader’s attention in its edgy narrative. It also allowed this strong vocal focus to drive an innovative form and movement, generating original narrative energy.
Kabul, August 2021: by Marie Altzinger
Making use of sliding frames, this piece juxtaposed two points of view on a central crisis, effectively inhabiting different female angles and voices to political ends. It used this form powerfully but with tight control, letting the explosive off-screen drama arise through subtly selected detail.
Taking Revenge on Gustav Klimt: (or The Paintbrush that isn’t a Paintbrush) by David Lewis
Taking on an effective and tonally-alive point of view, this piece dissects a slice of artist’s model’s life with wry, cutting amusement at the sexual politics of image-making. Sharp, clever, economical and tongue-in-cheek.
A Mother Knows: by Russell Reader
The economy of this piece worked powerfully to control strong emotion and to cover a long history in brief vocalized details. Spoken tension connects us effectively with character, subtly revealing a moving subtext beneath the minimal and controlled narration, approaching a heavy topic through bare contained voice.
While the Planet Still Remains: by Fiona J Mackintosh
Immersive second-person narration and lyric rhythm at the sentence level were at the heart of this piece’s impact. It took on a vast and weighty subject, containing it effectively through sustained focus and a personal approach, building a clever analogy into its ending.
A LITTLE ABOUT THE WINNERS:
Partridge Boswell is a stay-at-home rover, father of seven, and author of the Grolier Award-winning collection Some Far Country. When not hitchhiking or freighthopping, his bindlestiff poems have recently found homes in Poetry, American Poetry Review, Poetry Ireland Review, Southword and The Moth. Co-founder of Bookstock Literary Festival, he teaches at Vallum Society for Education in Arts & Letters in Montreal and troubadours widely with the poetry/music group Los Lorcas, whose debut release Last Night in America is available on Thunder Ridge Records. Please say hello when you see him busking on Grafton Street.
Linda Nemec Foster is a poet and writer, currently living in Grand Rapids, Michigan (USA). She is the granddaughter of immigrants from southern Poland who settled in Cleveland, Ohio. Many of her relatives and friends still live in Poland (some of them near the Ukraine border) and she has visited them and that part of the world many times. The author of 12 collections of poetry (e.g. The Blue Divide, 2021 and The Lake Michigan Mermaid, 2018), Foster was the Inaugural Poet Laureate of Grand Rapids from 2003-2005.
Z. Aaron Young is an MFA candidate in the NYU Low-Residency program and considers himself a fiction writer and spare-time philosopher. His writing has appeared in various folders across his laptop and has been read by tens of people. His hobbies are extremely easy to list and he very much enjoys music. When he’s not sleeping, he can be found more or less awake.
J.P. Walshe lives in Malahide, Co. Dublin and works in libraries. When not surrounded by books he can be found on the sofa trying to forget about them. After starting but then writing nothing for eight years he’s taken up where he left off and finds it a much more productive way to spend insomnia. He once rode a bike cab in San Diego and taught English while pretending to know grammar in Barcelona.”
Kathryn Henion’s fiction has appeared in over twenty journals, including Beloit Fiction Journal, Saranac Review, Natural Bridge, and Green Mountains Review. She earned a Ph.D. in English from Binghamton University, where she was editor of the biannual literary magazine Harpur Palate. Currently she serves as fiction editor for the online journal of art and literature, Anomaly, and lives, works, and writes in Ithaca, NY. www.kathrynhenion.com
When Seamus Scanlon won the Fish Flash Fiction Prize with The Long Wet Grass (2011) he thought he had arrived (in West Cork). When the story became a one act play (2014) he thought he had arrived (on Broadway). When the story became a film (2015) he thought he had arrived (in Hollywood). When the play was translated into Japanese and staged in Tokyo (2018) he thought he had arrived (in the East). Will the Beauty Curse (2022) finally lift his arrival curse? Stay tuned www.seamusscanlon.com
Marie Altzinger was born in Luxembourg, and moved to Ireland at the age of six. Discouraged by a schoolteacher obsessed with the descriptive style of Gerald Manley Hopkins, Marie gave up creative writing for a quarter of a century. Thankfully she eventually saw the error of her ways, and now has two huge suitcases stuffed with PTCs (Pieces to Consider). Marie lives in Dundrum, Dublin, with her wonderful husband, fabulous daughter, and super dog.
David X. Lewis has written journalism for Reuters, speeches on AIDS for WHO, and documents for a Geneva organisation that sacked him. He now focuses on creative writing from Ferney-Voltaire, France. The opening of his third (unpublished) novel was nominated for a Pushcart in 2021, when he also won the Bangor 40-word competition. In 2022 he will be published by Bath Flash Fiction and (twice) in Sticks and Stones, an Oxford anthology of “flash greats”.
Fiona J. Mackintosh (www.fionajmackintosh.com) is the Scottish-American author of a flash collection, The Yet Unknowing World published by Ad Hoc Fiction. She has won the Fish, Bath, Reflex, and Flash 500 Awards, and her short stories have been listed in several cool competitions in the UK and Ireland. She lives just outside Washington D.C., but she’s thankful that her imagination can carry her across continents and time, both during lockdowns and in happier times.
Russell Reader lives in Keele, England, with his husband and two sons. He won first prize in the New Writer Magazine’s Prose and Poetry Awards and has been published by Litro, InkTears, Flash, Grist, and Bath Flash Fiction. One day he would like to write a story that isn’t sad and grim.
(alphabetical order)
There are 41 flash stories in the short-list. There were 948 entries in total.
Title |
First Name |
Last Name |
|
|
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Kabul, August 2021 |
Marie |
Altzinger |
The day you chipped a tooth and touched a nerve |
Lesley |
Bungay |
Labels |
Letty |
Butler |
Fishes I Have Known |
Ric |
Carter |
Brez |
Ava |
Dan-Gur |
Karma Chameleon |
Anne |
Eyries |
Echolalia |
Elizabeth |
Field |
On the Other Side of the World |
Linda |
Nemec Foster |
The Door Opens |
Geoffrey |
Graves |
Firelight |
Kathryn |
Henion |
Lost Treasure |
Maria |
Jackson |
Herring |
Sarah |
Kartalia |
Cleft by the lines of cowards |
Nelum |
Kaur |
Blood Brothers |
Jim |
King |
Koel |
Alfie |
Lee |
Flash Fiction |
Alfie |
Lee |
A Human Jellyfish Goes Missing |
David |
Lewis |
Taking Revenge on August Klimt |
David |
Lewis |
A Becket Tale: 1972 |
Finbar |
Lillis |
Rocket-ship set-up guide |
Kik |
Lodge |
While the Planet Still Remains |
Fiona J |
Mackintosh |
“Going, Going, Gone!” |
Michael |
Mahoney |
The Prodigal’s Brother |
Patrick |
McCann |
A Brush with Circe |
Lauren |
McNamara |
Never Let Me Go |
Geoffrey |
Mead |
GHOSTS |
Catherine |
Neville |
Posted |
Brigita |
Orel |
A Mother Knows |
Russell |
Reader |
Falling Woman |
Hannah |
Retallick |
For a Time, I |
Hannah |
Retallick |
Meltdown |
Nicholas |
Ruddock |
Bed Time |
Yvonne |
Sampson |
The Sister as a Fox |
Shannon |
Savvas |
Deciduous Trees |
Adrian |
Scanlan |
The Twins |
Seamus |
Scanlon |
Beauty Curse |
Seamus |
Scanlon |
The Kiss |
Jo |
Skinner |
Coppélia Doll Variation |
Michaela |
Tamma |
The Proposal, Lyme Regis, 1936 |
Ken |
Wilson |
Satellite of love |
Alison |
Woodhouse |
Millstone |
Z. Aaron |
Young |
(alphabetical order)
There are 72 flash stories in the long-list. There were 948 entries in total.
Title |
First Name |
Last Name |
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|
|
Kabul, August 2021 |
Marie |
Altzinger |
SISTERS |
Carrie |
Beckwith |
The Stone Cottage |
Partridge |
Boswell |
A Cry Beneath The Leaves |
Michael P |
Bowles |
White is the Color of Decay |
Matthew |
Brandon |
Things I Would Do if I Was a Disgraced Soviet |
Kati |
Bumbera |
The day you chipped a tooth and touched a nerve |
Lesley |
Bungay |
Labels |
Letty |
Butler |
Fishes I Have Known |
Ric |
Carter |
All That Remains |
Charlene |
Cason |
Man Up |
Yvonne |
Clarke |
Brez |
Ava |
Dan-Gur |
Trying to Write a Haiku |
Rosamund |
Davies |
Driving Home |
Christina |
Eagles |
On taking Macy’s Kittens to the Sawmill |
Henry |
Edwards |
Caravan |
Susan |
Elsley |
Subject: Humanity 2022-4022 |
Stephen |
Enciso |
Mountain Air Folly |
Tanya |
Esnault |
Karma Chameleon |
Anne |
Eyries |
Warp Factor |
Tom |
Farrell |
Echolalia |
Elizabeth |
Field |
Leaving hospital with a suitcase |
Nick |
Fordham |
On the Other Side of the World |
Linda |
Nemec Foster |
Burhan Now or Never |
Nancy |
Freund |
Aliens |
John |
Fullerton |
Keys |
Laura |
Geringer Bass |
In the Light |
Cicely |
Gill |
Odette at Tea-Time |
Heather Lynne |
Goddard |
The Door Opens |
Geoffrey |
Graves |
An Imitation |
Leonie |
Gregson |
Last Wave |
Michael |
Hainsworth |
Sticks and Stones |
Daniel |
Harwood |
Turning Back Time |
Hannah |
Hawthorne |
Firelight |
Kathryn |
Henion |
It’s a Living |
Tova |
Hope-Liel |
Lost Treasure |
Maria |
Jackson |
Fishtail or Why I Can’t Recommend a Birthing Pool |
Jupiter |
Jones |
Was this an Act of God |
Roger |
Jones |
Herring |
Sarah |
Kartalia |
Cleft by the lines of cowards |
Nelum |
Kaur |
Blood Brothers |
Jim |
King |
This Isn’t Working Anymore |
Keith |
Law |
1-800-KARS-4-KIDS |
jeffrey |
lazar |
Colour of Night |
Roland |
Leach |
Koel |
Alfie |
Lee |
Flash Fiction |
Alfie |
Lee |
The Dragon’s Inn |
Alfie |
Lee |
Jack |
Alfie |
Lee |
Gilbert |
Alfie |
Lee |
Commonwealth |
Alfie |
Lee |
A Human Jellyfish Goes Missing |
David |
Lewis |
Taking Revenge on August Klimt |
David |
Lewis |
A Becket Tale: 1972 |
Finbar |
Lillis |
Rocket-ship set-up guide |
Kik |
Lodge |
Broken |
Laurie |
Mackie |
While the Planet Still Remains |
Fiona J |
Mackintosh |
Going, Going, Gone! |
Michael |
Mahoney |
Suspicion |
Robert |
McBrearty |
The Prodigal’s Brother |
Patrick |
McCann |
Mantelpiece |
Alan |
McCormick |
Fearing |
Paul |
McKeogh |
A Brush with Circe |
Lauren |
McNamara |
Never Let Me Go |
Geoffrey |
Mead |
Nouvelle Cuisine |
Geoffrey |
Mead |
Electric Cold |
Jane |
Messer |
Beyond |
Hailey |
Millhollen |
The Baptism |
Alison |
Milner |
Cornered |
Katrina |
Moinet |
GHOSTS |
Catherine |
Neville |
Ed Vedder |
Dominic |
Nunan |
How to take Prizewinning Photos |
Tom |
O’Brien |
The Mummies of Guanajuato |
Pamolu |
Oldham |
Versions of Him |
Helen |
O’Neill |
Posted |
Brigita |
Orel |
Disassociation |
Carolyn |
Peck |
The closest I came to having sex after twelve years |
Kathryn |
Phelan |
A Mother Knows |
Russell |
Reader |
Turkey Legs |
James |
Reid |
Falling Woman |
Hannah |
Retallick |
For a Time, I |
Hannah |
Retallick |
The Fly Trap by the Window Adjacent to My House |
Hannah |
Retallick |
Meltdown |
Nicholas |
Ruddock |
No Future in Being a Postman |
Michael |
Salander |
Bed Time |
Yvonne |
Sampson |
The Sister as a Fox |
Shannon |
Savvas |
Deciduous Trees |
Adrian |
Scanlan |
The Twins |
Seamus |
Scanlon |
Beauty Curse |
Seamus |
Scanlon |
Man of Letters |
Wilma |
Scharrer |
Cider on Your Lips |
Kim |
Schroeder |
King Cat |
Lucy |
Shuttleworth |
Way Out West |
John |
Simms |
The Kiss |
Jo |
Skinner |
Eventuality |
Jonathan |
Splittgerber |
Underpaid |
Jamie |
Stacey |
The Spirit of Things |
Nora |
Studholme |
Coppélia Doll Variation |
Michaela |
Tamma |
Some creatures trapped in ice |
Hilary |
Taylor |
Dog Nose |
Brendan |
Thomas |
The Movements |
Cole |
Tucci |
Never too late |
Melanie |
Veenstra |
Crabwalk |
John |
Walshe |
Shedding Skin |
Nicole |
Watt |
Savannah Animals Fun For Kids |
Susan |
Wigmore |
The Proposal, Lyme Regis, 1936 |
Ken |
Wilson |
The electric is-ness of life |
Michele |
Wong |
Satellite of love |
Alison |
Woodhouse |
Snowfall |
Amy |
Wright |
Millstone |
Z. Aaron |
Young |
You Can Only Jump Forward |
Glen |
Zehr |
Vivid, astute, gripping, evocative. These stories utterly transported me. – Sarah Hall (Short Story)
In the landscape of emotion and folly, Flash writers are a fearless lot – these stories prove it. – Michelle Elvy (Flash Fiction)
… combining the personal and particular with the universal, each touching in surprising ways … experiences that burn deep, that need to be told. – Sean Lusk (Memoir)
Strong poems. First place is a poem I wish I’d written! – Billy Collins (Poetry)
More… a showcase of disquiet, tension, subversion and surprise …
so many skilled pieces … gem-like, compressed and glinting, little worlds in entirety that refracted life and ideas … What a joy!
– Sarah Hall
… memoirs pinpointing precise
feelings of loss and longing and desire.
– Sean Lusk
What a pleasure to watch these poets’ minds at work, guiding us this way and that.
– Billy Collins
‘… delightful, lively send-up … A vivid imagination is at play here, and a fine frenzy is the result.’ – Billy Collins
‘… laying frames of scenic detail to compose a lyric collage … enticing … resonates compellingly. … explosive off-screen drama arises through subtly-selected detail. Sharp, clever, economical, tongue-in-cheek.’ – Tracey Slaughter
Brave stories of danger and heart and sincerity.
Some risk everything outright, some are desperately quiet, but their intensity lies in what is unsaid and off the page.
These are brilliant pieces from bright, new voices.
A thrill to read.
~ Emily Ruskovich
I could see great stretches of imagination. I saw experimentation. I saw novelty with voice and style. I saw sentences that embraced both meaning and music. ~ Colum McCann
MoreThese glorious pieces have spun across the globe – pit-stopping in Japan, the Aussie outback, Vancouver, Paris, Amsterdam and our own Hibernian shores – traversing times past, present and imagined future as deftly as they mine the secret tunnels of the human heart. Enjoy the cavalcade. – Mia Gallagher
MoreThe standard is high, in terms of the emotional impact these writers managed to wring from just a few pages. – Billy O’Callaghan
Loop-de-loopy, fizz, and dazzle … unique and compelling—compressed, expansive, and surprising. – Sherrie Flick
Every page oozes with a sense of place and time. – Marti Leimbach
Energetic, dense with detail … engages us in the act of seeing, reminds us that attention is itself a form of praise. – Ellen Bass
MoreDead Souls has the magic surplus of meaning that characterises fine examples of the form – Neel Mukherjee
I was looking for terrific writing of course – something Fish attracts in spades, and I was richly rewarded right across the spectrum – Vanessa Gebbie
Really excellent – skilfully woven – Chris Stewart
Remarkable – Jo Shapcott
The practitioners of the art of brevity and super-brevity whose work is in this book have mastered the skills and distilled and double-distilled their work like the finest whiskey.
More€12 (incl. p&p) Sunrise Sunset by Tina Pisco Read Irish Times review by Claire Looby Surreal, sad, zany, funny, Tina Pisco’s stories are drawn from gritty experience as much as the swirling clouds of the imagination. An astute, empathetic, sometimes savage observer, she brings her characters to life. They dance themselves onto the pages, […]
MoreHow do we transform personal experience of pain into literature? How do we create and then chisel away at those images of others, of loss, of suffering, of unspeakable helplessness so that they become works of art that aim for a shared humanity? The pieces selected here seem to prompt all these questions and the best of them offer some great answers.
– Carmen Bugan.
What a high standard all round – of craft, imagination and originality: and what a wide range of feeling and vision.
Ruth Padel
I was struck by how funny many of the stories are, several of them joyously so – they are madcap and eccentric and great fun. Others – despite restrained and elegant prose – managed to be devastating. All of them are the work of writers with talent.
Claire Kilroy
The writing comes first, the bottom line comes last. And sandwiched between is an eye for the innovative, the inventive and the extraordinary.
MoreA new collection from around the globe: innovative, exciting, invigorating work from the writers and poets who will be making waves for some time to come. David Mitchell, Michael Collins, David Shields and Billy Collins selected the stories, flash fiction, memoirs and poems in this anthology.
MoreReading the one page stories I was a little dazzled, and disappointed that I couldn’t give the prize to everybody. It’s such a tight format, every word must count, every punctuation mark. ‘The Long Wet Grass’ is a masterly bit of story telling … I still can’t get it out of my mind.
– Chris Stewart
The perfectly achieved story transcends the limitations of space with profundity and insight. What I look for in fiction, of whatever length, is authenticity and intensity of feeling. I demand to be moved, to be transported, to be introduced into other lives. The stories I have selected for this anthology have managed this. – Ronan Bennett, Short Story Judge.
MoreI sing those who are published here – they have done a very fine job. It is difficult to create from dust, which is what writers do. It is an honour to have read your work. – Colum McCann
MoreThe entries into this year’s Fish Short Story Prize were universally strong. From these the judges have selected winners, we believe, of exceptional virtue. – Carlo Gebler
MoreI was amazed and delighted at the range and quality of these stories. Every one of them was interesting, well-written, beautifully crafted and, as a short-story must, every one of them focused my attention on that very curtailed tableau which a short-story necessarily sets before us. – Michael Collins
MoreThese stories voice all that is vibrant about the form. – Gerard Donovan. Very short stories pack a poetic punch. Each of these holds its own surprise, or two. Dive into these seemingly small worlds. You’ll come up anew. – Angela Jane Fountas
MoreEach of the pieces here has been chosen for its excellence. They are a delightfully varied assortment. More than usual for an anthology, this is a compendium of all the different ways that fiction can succeed. I invite you to turn to ‘All the King’s Horses’. The past is here. Begin.
– Michel Faber
Literary anthologies, especially of new work, act as a kind of indicator to a society’s concerns. This Short Story collection, such a sharp and useful enterprise, goes beyond that. Its internationality demonstrates how our concerns are held in common across the globe. – Frank Delaney
MoreFrom the daily routine of a career in ‘Spoonface’, to the powerful, recurring image of a freezer in ‘Shadow Lives’. It was the remarkable focus on the ordinary that made these Fish short stories such a pleasure to read. – Hugo Hamilton
MoreIn a world where twenty screens of bullshit seem to be revolving without respite … there is nothing that can surpass the ‘explosion of art’ and its obstinate insistence on making sense of things. These dedicated scribes, as though some secret society, heroically, humbly, are espousing a noble cause.
– Pat McCabe
It’s supposed to be a short form, the good story, but it has about it a largeness I love. There is something to admire in all these tales, these strange, insistent invention. They take place in a rich and satisfying mixture of places, countries of the mind and heart. – Christopher Hope
MoreThere are fine stories in this new anthology, some small and intimate, some reaching out through the personal for a wider, more universal perspective, wishing to tell a story – grand, simple, complex or everyday, wishing to engage you the reader. – Kate O’Riodan
MoreI feel like issuing a health warning with this Fish Anthology these stories may seriously damage your outlook – Here the writers view the world in their unique way, and have the imagination, talent, and the courage to refine it into that most surprising of all art forms the short story. – Clem Cairns.
MoreEvery story in this book makes its own original way in the world. knowing which are the telling moments, and showing them to us. And as the narrator of the winning story casually remarks, ‘Sometimes its the small things that amaze me’ – Molly McCloskey
MoreThe stories here possess the difference, the quirkiness and the spark. They follow their own road and their own ideas their own way. It is a valuable quality which makes this collection a varied one. Read it, I hope you say to yourself like I did on many occasions, ‘That’s deadly. How did they think of that?’ – Eamonn Sweeney
MoreReally good short stories like these, don’t read like they were written. They read like they simply grew on the page. – Joseph O’Connor
MoreThe writers in this collection can write short stories . . . their quality is the only thing they have in common. – Roddy Doyle
MoreThis is the first volume of short stories from Ireland’s newest publishing house. We are proud that fish has enabled 15 budding new writers be published in this anthology, and I look forward to seeing many of them in print again.
More12 Miles Out was selected by David Mitchell as the winner of the Fish Unpublished Novel Award.
A love story, thriller and historical novel; funny and sad, uplifting and enlightening.
You only know who you can’t trust. You can’t trust the law, because there’s none in New Ireland. You can’t trust the Church, because they think they’re the law. And you can’t trust the State, because they think they’re the Church And most of all, you can’t trust your friends, because you can’t remember who they were anymore.
MoreA memoir of urban life, chronicled through its central character, Mackey. From momentary reflections to stories about his break with childhood and adolescence, the early introduction to the Big World, the discovery of romance and then love, the powerlessness of ordinary people, the weaknesses that end in disappointment and the strengths that help them seek redemption and belonging.
MoreIan Wild’s stories mix Monty Python with Hammer Horror, and the Beatles with Shakespeare, but his anarchic style and sense of humour remain very much his own in this collection of tall tales from another planet. Where else would you find vengeful organs, the inside story of Eleanor Rigby, mobile moustaches, and Vikings looting a Cork City branch of Abracababra?
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